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10th June Show
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Alex
10:37
Nathanael I love your first line - perhaps that dream will become a reality after all this radioblogging?
Oskar Raspberries
10:37
I dreamed i saw a gigantic grass hoper
Sachin-Warren Road
10:37
I dreamed that coffee never ended and I could keep drinking it!
Erin Bispham Drive
10:37
I dreamed I touched the soft, scarlet, smooth, velvet on the unicorn's saddle.
George
10:37
Ted was the corgi at buckingham pakace
Sachi
10:37
I dreamed the world was at peace.
Amy He - NSJ raspberries bubble
10:37
I dreamt I ate a velvet rock then wore a big oak tree.
Violet Leh
10:37
I dreamed i touched a icey volcano.
Noah Newland St Johns
10:37
I dreamed I saw a tooth brush singing
Lucas
10:37
I dreamed I was squished  by Felipe.
Mrs Murrin
10:37
Sam, I know you would love to be that dancing moth!
Sachi
10:37
I dreamed that I was not completly crazy.
Oskar Raspberries
10:37
I dreamed i saw a ant eat a lion
Mrs James
10:38
Sachi, would you like to have all the knowledge in the World?  What would be the benefits?  What would be the negative things about knowing everything?
Mrs H Bispham Drive
10:38
Ms Wilson - NSJ - I really like that idea! Would you tell her to do anything differently? ;)
Kit
10:38
I dreamed chicken was fighting against taste buds.
Sachi
10:38
I dreamed that I could speak backwards.
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:38
I dreamed about lockdown being over.
Mrs Kilgour
10:38
Erin - I love that you have tried alliteration with your adjectives. I would try to choose two of the most descriptive rather than use them all.
Mrs H Bispham Drive
10:39
Erin - great attempt at alliteration.
Mrs Kilgour
10:39
Sachi - that would be confusing, wouldn't it?
Mrs James
10:39
Sachin, lots of great ideas of combining opposites e.g. "blankets provided chill".  Make sure each line is as powerful as: "You could only skate on thick ice."  Try and get each idea to flow into another one so your poem has cohesion.
Martha bird
10:41
i dreamed I slid down a rainbow.  I dreamed I could eat ice. I dreamed that the mood was made of delicious cheese. I dreamt I could speak every language on the planet. I dreamed I ate a picnic on the top of Mount Everest.
Mrs James
10:42
Violet, great image of an icy volcano.  Don't forget a capital letter for I.  When do we use a and when do we use an?
10:43
Sachi, what else could you do backwards?  This could be the beginning of a very interesting story or poem.
Larraine H
10:45
Ruby M Very interesting - just edit the word dogs - should be dog's.
10:46
Nina S-H  could you say what was beautiful about the mermaids? lovely idea
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