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13th May Show
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4:08
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4:09
But the station was silent and icy.
Sachi
5:11
Seren grasped the package to her chest, wondering if she should open it.
Joe
5:11
serum seared up and down the platform
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
5:11
Slowly, hesitantly, she walked up the wooden platform and tripped over a small package.
Miraclea
5:11
Seren curiously peered around her wondering what the parcel could hold.
Olive
5:11
Seren stared at the parcel wondering whether she should open it.
Mrs Collins South Kilvington
5:12
What should she do now?
Ted
5:12
And at that moment, Seren grasped the package.
Emily-Oaksey Class3
5:12
Suddenly, Serena looked down at her feet...there was a parcel!
Shreesha
5:12
Seren stared at the package confused, to open it or not?
Seb F
5:12
Seren clutched the parcel tightly and looked out into the darkness.
Sachi
5:12
She was about to peel the corner off when she heard it; a train was coming.
Eliza W
5:12
carrying on on Sachi: She closed her eyes and placed it back on the empty bench.
Sachin
5:12
Thoughts whizzed through Serern's mind as she decided enough was enough...
Charlotte
5:12
Seren slowly turns around, crunch, the parcel is gone...
Oliver (Pensby Primary)
5:12
At that moment Seren dropped the packet as she heard an unfamiliar noise coming from the package...
Lily SWW
5:12
As seren spoke, the box made another noise.
Oliver screen sww
5:12
Days later the crowds piled in and the ice slowly melted but Seren had to move because her Mum never returned
Jonah
5:13
Seren picked up the package and quickly threw it into the bin.
Emily,10
5:13
Seren peered up and down the deserted, icy platform, wondering whether she should open it.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
5:13
Seren picked up the package and held it away from her body, fearing that it was dangerous.
Freya pensby primary school
5:13
Dark filled the station as seren clutched the package tightly.
Josh & Evie
5:13
At that moment, a smokey sent engulfed her nostrils.
Niamh H
5:13
Seren stared at the parcel in her hands, wondering what was inside.
Edith
5:13
seren looked around then opend parcel just a crack...
Joe
5:13
She held out her arm
Abigail northmead
5:13
Serum  picked the parcel carefully and peared
Olivia
5:13
Seren gazed at the package with strong temptation to open it.
Rebecca From Bunel Class
5:13
Seren dropped the package on the table and wondered what was inside.
Nicola
5:13
Seren sat for a moment, frozen with uncertainty.
St Vincent's School, Hull
5:13
Esme, Ethan, Eric, Amie, Gabriel, Natalie

Seren hesitantly peered beneath the wrapping.
Chloe -SWW
5:13
Searen suddenly heard a chugging, then spinning round saw the man tied to the train...
Dylan
5:13
Serum, shivering, grabbed the package and ran
Mrs James
5:13
Lily, remember capitals for names.
Maggie SWW
5:13
Cautiously, she walked towards the parcel, picked it up and clutched it tight.
Mrs James
5:13
Nicola I like the idea of frozen with uncertainty!
Kitty Wright.
5:14
She heard the train coming, she had no choice she had to take the parcel with her.
Sachin
5:14
There was a huff of steam as a steam engine pulled into the platform..
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
5:14
She closed her eyes and brought it towards herself, feeling the soggy parcel and tugged at the crimson string binding it.
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