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Ellie (Thorntree primary)yr6
10:29
His head was braided with wrinkles and toenails were black with slimy grime piercing the back of your head and stealing your soul with his filthy rotted fingernails. He could smell you with his out-of-place nose inhaling your fear like a dog lapping up water after a run.
Benjamin Warren Road Primary
10:29
He grabbed what seemed like a bat and smacked a crow round the head with it ripping it to pieces.
Emily, Manor field
10:29
The walls around him were green with slimy moss that clung to his warty skin.
keerat
10:29
Oh sorry Mrs James it is deer.
Isla
10:29
I stopped. There was a goblin in my path. He had scaly, green skin, an ugly big nose and long, dirty nails that made scratches on the walls. (Is that better?)
Lyra
10:29
The goblin’s eyes were like hollow black caves with no ends. The end of his nose was a poisonous purple and his skin a vivid, sickly, green, luminous in the coolly lit night air. His fingernails were long and brown and teetering on the end of dirt encrusted, skinny fingers.
Alice
10:29
His mysterious bright red eyes stared intensely.
Emma From Westfield :P
10:29
Eden- love it!
Avina Yr5 thorntree
10:29
He lives in a under ground compartment inside an abandoned school .
Violet LEH Y6
10:29
The love goblin makes people fall out of love with one glare of his beady eyes or a smile with his sharp teeth.
Jake SWW
10:29
He is fully made of lava and lives in a volcano by his self.
Mason Creste Outfield
10:29
The Goblin has a VERY SHARP NAIL!
Ryan@John Moore Primary
10:29
His skin is as hard as rock.  Nails as sharp as a sword.
Hamza djs
10:29
Tree bunker goblin if spotted leaps in to his top secret bunker with green moss covering it . Ears like elves that flap in the cold swaying breeze.Wears a crimson robe red eyes like a lion with fierce anger.
Mrs James
10:29
Chloe, you have written a detailed description of your goblin.  I especially like the idea of the mohawk. Your next step is to read your writing aloud and you will 'hear' where you need to add punctuation.
Oliver/UCPS
10:30
Nails cracking into the walls, scraping the concrete and spraying vile pieces of dirt everywhere.
Jodie
10:30
He was abrupt as his internal instincts make him like that.
Gabriel
10:30
His disgusting smile reached up to his ears and yellow, sharp eyes.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:30
Louie - well done for taking Pie's advice and adding good verb choices.
Emily, Manor field
10:30
The sky was the colour of nightmares.
Djs kai
10:30
The calm relaxed sea goblin breezing in the water
Nidharshna
10:30
His small beady eyes can see from 100 km away and his nose can smell blood of children's hurt.
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:30
His teeth are glorious white and she has blonde hair. Her skin is the colour of snow. But then she changes. Her skin wrinkles and turns green. Her nails go yellow, so do her teeth! Her hair goes grey and wiry. Grotesque goblin.
Martha
10:30
His nails were gnarled and his hands encrusted in dirt.
Beabop
10:30
They have a gap between every tooth as big as a giant's finger.
Ms Dodd (Thorntree)
10:30
Let's all try to use some similes e.g. its teeth were as sharp as razors.
Douglas
10:30
Castle haunter, children scoffer, evil embracer.
Alice year 5 Thorntree
10:30
His skin was as slimy as a jungle swamp.
Rosa-Micklefield School
10:30
He had crooked teeth, frail limbs, and eyes that bulged beneath curved, hairy eyebrows.
ollie
10:30
It is a volcanic goblin Its skin is made out of molten lava it lives in side of volcanos.
Avneet djs
10:30
It looks like  blood melting down his neck
Olivia st. Teresa’s
10:30
His ears were large and had gnarly holes in them
Lucas Boothman
10:30
He was a mistaken type of goblin. Most people thought the pencil goblins where evil ones which where small and jumped up into the eyes of anyone that touched them. Nobody knew that it was just self defence.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:30
Kailen - well done for using brackets to add extra details.
Joseph 10
10:30
The Goblin cried out a horrible scream it shattered all the windows within 40 miles.
Rylee summerfildes
10:30
Teeth like sharped rocks on the beach.
Miss Man@John Moore Primary
10:30
Olivia st. Teresa’s - great description.  It makes me wonder what he has been up to.
Toby b
10:30
it looks like his brains are going to fall out of his ears. well if he has some.
Mrs Batchelor
10:30
Martha - love the encrusted hands
Mila-JMPS-home
10:30
Great description Miss Man @ John Moore! I love the added extra: on a bit summer's day.
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