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George
10:33
Emily - Love the image. I can see the goblin
Mrs Sawyer
10:34
Oliver C - what a great image: "teeth sharp as pins".
Mrs James
10:36
Hamza, I like your idea of a tree bunker goblin and how when it is spotted, it jumps into a moss covered top secret bunker.  What might it eat?  If it lives in a tree bunker, what might its diet be?
10:38
Elisabeth, do you mean callous or calluses?
10:40
Ellie, great idea of a mind that is as twisted as a rope.  Can you give one of your goblin's thoughts that show he has a twisted mind?
10:43
Ethan, I wouldn't want to meet your goblin.  Try and rewrite your sentence so that each idea has its own sentence.  This ensures each idea has a greater impact.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:53
Well done everyone!
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:56
Emily - I love the idea of 'brutally bad breath'!
10:58
Melody - his frail body was skinny - could you turn this into a simile? As skinny as.....
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