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Joseph 10
10:23
The Goblin's poky ears stuck up like a neatly folded piece of paper.
Niamh Osbaston CiW
10:23
The goblin stood on the steps, staring at the children. He grinned, and his yellowing teeth were as sharp as a cat's claws. When he opened his mouth to talk, his breath was so disgusting that Violet nearly fainted!
George Llandogo
10:23
He had trousers made of leather sacks, and a moleskin ammunition strap. He was holding a Oakwood crossbow.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:23
Rylee...for doing what? Add to the sentence.
Ms McCarron
10:24
Ooh...  'prune like face'- lovely vivid image Nina!
Mrs James
10:24
Shreesha, look at your phrase, "not seen rarely." Explain what you mean.
Oliver/UCPS
10:24
His small, evil brain, shriveled up thinking of his riches.
kitty
10:24
His ears as pointy as a knife .
Olivia, Summerfields
10:24
Arms like a  t-rex
Beatrix@John Moore Primary
10:24
Nails like dagger piercing its nails into its prey.
honey rose spceds
10:24
jake - realy good
Kathryn
10:24
Only the most discernible observer would have noticed Gerald the Mouse quaking on his hind paws covering his eyes. The reason why he was so terrified was only a few paces away from him. The odious ogre stomped ominously down the the cold broken steps. He was smelly, really smelly like a dozen forgotten eggs that had been broken by accident. Hair on his back - like a door mat, hiding reptilian iridescent skin.
Sophia LEH
10:24
His scaley skin peeling of , his pointy ears like mountains , his eyes staring helplessly at you and his blood filled mouth dripping down his chin.
Utkarsha-Warren Road
10:24
Dirt sat on in his nails permanently smelling like rotten eggs
Micklefield 6M
10:24
His nose was a knife, waiting to cut through a child's dream.
Sachin
10:24
His skin was like lizard; head twisting like a mechanical toy.
Emily, Manor field
10:24
His eyes peirced through you like daggers, tearing out your thoughts.
Freya pensby primary school
10:24
His ragged trousers on his discusting legs.
Hannah from St Andrews Primary
10:24
... I had arrived
Adyan DJS
10:24
The turqouise gobblin has pointy ears and is vilent
Ms McCarron
10:24
Jacob-love that toenails image!
TURNBULL
10:24
THE TOXIC GOBLIN PLODDED UP THE  STAIRS CURSING TO HIMSELF ''WHY CANT I BE NORMAL?''
Alice
10:24
His light green leather skin, slimier than a slugs, hung from his claws.
Abigail/Kilmington
10:24
His teeth were as yellow as the sun.
Pen Pen Malorees Junior School
10:24
It looks like he's about to pounce right onto my face.
Mrs Eltringham
10:24
Nina S-H His prune like face is green the same as the rest of his body his beady eyes stare straidht at me!Nina S-H - great use of simile . Watch your spelling
charlie cb stone with wood ford
10:24
As the Goblin stood there grinning at you .
Jaap djs
10:24
My Goblin is a ballon Goblin. His name is Strechy .He lives with me at home but obviously in a ballon.
Kacey
10:24
The Goblin glared at the glittering gold.
Olivia, Summerfields
10:24
claws that are so sharp when they touch you drip blood
Jess@John Moore Primary
10:24
The goblin's eyes are as full as a water bottle with dark spirits waiting to be released.
Alex Djs
10:25
A lime green goblin,creeping along the moss ridden steps that led to the grave of his human form going to devour the entire remaining flesh
Melody - SummerFields
10:25
The flower goblin lives in flowery meadows and are as yellow as the sun, they smell of daisies.
Martha
10:25
His eyes seemed to pull all the world around him like he was hypnotising it.
David Sacred-Heart Battersea
10:25
The goblin was a sickening green colour with harmless skinny arms and legs.
Eden, Summerfields
10:25
The goblin crept towards me, scraping its talons against the brick wall, making a mind numbing sound...I screamed but no help came, I was going to die.
Mrs James
10:25
Beatrix - great idea that really conjures up an image of the goblin.  Now read your sentence aloud.  Can you spot something you need to change?
Louis, Sacred Heart Battersea
10:25
It's unkempt claws etched at the ancient steps caked with dirt built up over years, possible decades.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:25
Olivia - well done for adding more detail! Put it all in one proper sentence now.
Phoebe
10:25
His eyes were shrouded in dark, demon demises.
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