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1st June Live Writing Session
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Mrs James
10:06
Rosie - fantastic simile.
Rosie
10:06
Tail flicker
Elsie/ Tockwith Primary
10:06
Fur as soft as a cloud.
Jersey
10:06
The cheater's claw's dig into the snow like a fast roket as fast as it can and tail floater
Mrs Kilgour
10:06
Emily - what type of blanket?
Daniel and Adam
10:06
Eyes glittered like diamonds.
Mr Walker
10:07
All - don’t forget those full stops!
Shreesha
10:07
The two cats, Con and Don, were fighting till death.
Aoife-clepington PS
10:07
His claws were as sharp as sharks teeth .
Guest
10:07
The pair of fighters stared into the other's eyes, then they pounced, as swift as a sparrow.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:07
Please add your name so we know who you are.
Hermione
10:07
Great black claws sliding through fur as soft as snow.
Micklefield 6M
10:07
Eyes like icicles.
Benjamin sww
10:07
Fast as light.
selma
10:07
Eyes like hazels
Oscar/St Margarets CE Primary
10:07
Muscles rippling like waves under his skin
Chloe-SWW
10:07
Its fur as spotty as a dalmatian.
George Llandogo
10:07
The two cats were on the prowl for mice, their whiskers twiching
Sam- Tockwith Primary
10:07
snow punder
Mrs Kilgour
10:07
Daniel and Adam - why did they glitter? Are they reflecting off the glare of the snow ... or the glare of the moon?
India (Pensby Primary
10:07
The two wild cats jumped as high as the peak of the highest mountain.
Mrs VB
10:07
Thomas, I love ‘icy hunter’.
Jade
10:07
Snow Cruncher.
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:07
It was coming, the wild beauty was coming. It's two black eyes locked on her. But then something curious happened...
Rayyan
10:07
As furry as a fox
Chendoor
10:07
As sleek as a lion, with an equal menacing feel.
Mrs James
10:07
Aoife-clepington - What word could you use before claws, to describe them?
Alice
10:07
As thick as wire, but as fragile as pottery the snow creeper’s whiskers twitched.
Jocelyn
10:08
speed bringer
Mrs James
10:08
Isla, great idea - where could you add a comma?  Is it pounded or pounced?
Lily SWW
10:08
A man looked down at the two spotted animals.
Edith
10:08
Pounding though the cloud like snow.
Mr Walker
10:08
Simi- as swift as a golden eagle realy brings it to life.
Florence - Weldon
10:08
eyes shining like diamonds
Niamh Osbaston CiW
10:08
Steely grey eyes and fur as soft and thick as a cloud.
Mrs Kilgour
10:08
Jade - great kenning! Use a hyphen to join it.
Mrs James
10:08
Jade - great kenning.
Harry - SWW.
10:08
The snow cats whiskers were like wire.
Jacob Grange Park
10:08
With trepidation, the silent stawker followed the little child.
Archie
10:08
Their whiskers are as sharp as talons
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