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28.01.22 - Friday Big Write
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Kaidy❤️Lenka✌️
5:15
in the midelof no were the butifle place on earth  is found and not one human has entered so elsilated you did not know it existed flowers swaying throw the light. Mountes  A’s still as cats in a gutter .The cool lake mooving gently to the isolated ,blue ocean.
Mr Shelton
5:16
I'm going to add some more pictures.  Can you think of more sentences using a similar structure to create a paragraph?  Try to vary your sentence structures within your paragraph.
5:22
Alice and skyla
5:23
The  beautiful deer elegantly trotted through the mysterious forest (skyla)
Ella and Esther😇
5:26
There was a tremendous,thunderous storm and a deer was running for its life.All of a sudden,it ran into a young girl who was sobbing because her father had took for ice cream and then once the storm
Alice and skyla
5:26
The beautiful deer elegantly trotted through the mysterious forest and dispersing in the distance coming back for a Appel.
5:30
The socing wet girl lively danced in the dark,damp rain . Fogeting everything and one
Ella and Esther😇
5:30
There was a tremendous,thunderous storm and a deer was running for its life.All of a sudden,it ran into a young girl who was sobbing because her father had went to get her ice cream but the storm started and he never came back.The deer did not know what was going on but after it had seen so many humans,It could slightly read emotions.It knew how she was feeling so it took her away to its
Jack & Myles
5:32
The clouds were thundering , Impaling menacingly, boats and ships .They were very furious, very furious. No one could avoid the terror of them.They were OUTRAGED!
Jake and Kinga 👌🏾
5:33
The towering, unsteady mountains slyly blocking the way of the sun underneath the clouds. Behind the lake, the blooming, periwinkle lavender is gently swaying in time with the wind. The bright, yellow sunflower waving through the wind. The extended, fern green grass flowing through the uncontrollable air. The fluffy large clouds floating silently over the mountains. In front of the lengthy grass, the shallow reflecting lake is rippling calmly.
Ella and Esther😇
5:35
There was a tremendous,thunderous storm and a deer was running for its life.All of a sudden,it ran into a young girl who was sobbing because her father had went to get her ice cream but the storm started and he never came back.The deer did not know what was going on but after it had seen so many humans,It could slightly read emotions.It knew how she was feeling so it took her away to it’s home.The girl was still feeling upset but she knew what the deer meant by taking her home so,she also felt very loved and comforted.
Alice and skyla
5:35
The thunder rattled within the clouds as the emerald green trees swayed hrendisly
Charlie daisy
5:35
The terefing thunder and lightning was on a Tuesday night nobody could sleep. Everyone was scared in bed not being able to breathe. Babies were screaming, kids were crying and adults were trying to calm down.
Lilie peace
5:35
Beside the river, a thunderous lightening storm appears. Underneath the outpouring waterfall destruction lays waste. There was wildlife and groups of deers in  the flaming trees. Amongst the deers, there was a little girl trying to find her family it was now a girl against the dangerous wilderness
Drew & Dean & Miss Amos
5:36
In the dark, mysterious forest there was a mammoth deer ready to charge angrily.  He rushed to the bright, yellow sunflowers beside the turquoise, calm lough that were cheerfully dancing in the sun. As he reached the lough, the lightening struck down on the land like the devil was punishing him.
Kaidy❤️Lenka✌️
5:37
The huge,magical,thunderstorm hitting hard on to the rich happy girl as she as dancing.she ran home to her home she sore a Radner but not dust a ordnrey Radner it was her best friend.there was
Alice and skyla
5:37
The gorgeous deer peasfuly limped freely threw the forist as blood dipped of it's nee
knee.
Cody and Miss Atherton
5:39
The intimidating, irritable stag was staring furiously in the forest. The dark brown, twisted trees swayed roughly side to side in the wind. On the trees, the meagre, green leaves rustled worryingly. Lastly, beside the house, the frightening, colourful forest swayed alarmingly.
Mr Shelton
7:27
Fantastic paragraphs Year 5!
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