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2nd June Live Writing Session
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Bispham Drive School
10:19
The boat was made of carved smooth wood from only the finest trees. - Max
Hayden Summerfields
10:19
On the boat made of emotions, I found fear, joy, regret and pride filling my head.
Mrs James
10:19
Louie - think about the science phenomena that link to boats, seas and wind in order to write your next sentences.  This will help build the cohesion.
Isla @St James
10:19
My boat is made of gold and silver it is very light it burns eyes.
Edith
10:19
In the boat of shadows, souls hide in the dark mist, waiting for visitors that never come.
Naomi
10:19
On the boat made from grass, butterflies fly around the mast.
Guy
10:19
A  boat made  out of fruit  because when you  are  hungry  you can have a delicious  and  healthy snack.
Theo Norton Fitzwarren
10:19
In the boat of diamonds the sun glistens and shines
Beatrice Friezland
10:19
A boat made of crawling, crusty crabs and shiny coral that shimmers in the moon light.
Utkarsha-Warren Road.
10:19
The boat is made out of rubies that glistened through the moon light
Zack
10:19
in the middle of the sea lies a mystycal  boat
Freya llangorse school
10:20
The boat made of sky floated gently past the softly foaming sea, the wind billowing through the sails.
Nirav Warren road primary school
10:20
On the boat of tranquillity,the wind plays a lovely tune.
Shreesha
10:20
The boat of peacefulness will sail vastly but steady.
Jersey from rowde academy, wilts
10:20
My boat is made of a wonderful enchanted gold with gold shooting out of it
Jamie- cams lane primary school
10:20
In the boat of time, the crew steered through the crashing waves, using a ticking time piece, better than any other steering wheel.
Amelia R home lingfield primary
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The only problem is was that the boat could only go out at night.
Kit -Weldon Ce Primary School
10:20
The boat of coke bottles sails into distance of a new world .
Sachin
10:20
On the boat of fireworks, squirrels stay away and flee.
Mr Clark @ Chorley St James
10:20
On the boat made with memories, the sailors wept as they remembered times past.
Ryan @John Moore Primary
10:20
In the boat of crystals, dolphins swim brightly around, jumping in and out of the water.
Oakleigh Summerfields
10:20
On a boat made of trees, swaying in the darkness
Bispham Drive School
10:20
The boat is made of happiness. Every piece that falls off is one person that is sad, angry or trapped in their own world unable to escape. Rhodri
Jade
10:20
On the boat made of cobwebs the sea-spray glistens on the hull.
Amelia-Grange Park primary
10:20
My boat is made of strands of sunset, the light of the sun and the glittery silver of an angel’s halo.
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Rayyan
10:20
In the boat made of  pink feathers 3 crabs dance happily
Mrs Kilgour
10:20
Edith - wonderful idea - very atmospheric! Can you extend this idea now?
Larraine
10:20
Felix -  great idea - why where there fish scales? Love the shining idea and want to know more.
Harry - SWW.
10:20
In the boat made of water there was a treasure chest lurking below.
6B Micklefield
10:20
On the night boat, stars were like sprinkles on a cake.
Buster Coombe
10:20
as we gently swaying side to side onto the treasure Island, we started to head towards cliffs.   Clementine a soda restart
Ida
10:20
In the boat of secrets treasure chest coated in cobwebs creaked.
James
10:20
The birds circled the boat of soft, fluffy clouds, screeching loudly.
Rosie SwW
10:20
In the boat made of... sweets their would be an elephant hawk moth and sweets!
Katie R Stockland Primary
10:20
The boat of glistening power.
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:20
The boat creeps with moonlight shining on their version of the exalibur, the Darksting.
Guest
10:20
Bright beautiful daffodils, shining in the sun light.
Hannah from St Andrews Primary
10:20
On the boat made of stealth, it was as loud as shadow.
Tilly Palace Wood.
10:20
My boat is made out of nature, calmness and togetherness. As the boat sets of the wind whips through silk soft sails. Dolphins start to gather and glide gracefully beside the mythical boat.
Grace M @John Moore Primary
10:20
The magical boat weaves in and out of the gentle waves.
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