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2nd June Live Writing Session
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Amelia R home lingfield primary
10:26
This boat is made of more than one million legos with functions.
Sam SwW
10:26
Meteorites occasionally stow away,
Jersey from rowde academy, wilts
10:26
My boat is made of magic candy from the island at the edge of a perfect sea blue on a sunshine bay with dec chair's on the boat with flower's roller coaster's going into pool with a spa and hot tub with enchanted potion mixing room.
Nirav Warren road primary school
10:26
I like the covid 19 phrase sachin
Bethan from Warren Road
10:26
On the boat of fear, my heart ached for hope but could not find it in the mist of despair.
Kit -Weldon Ce Primary School
10:26
In the boat of terror , made me shiver
keerat
10:26
Thanks Devon for the feedback.
Izzy SWW
10:26
On the boat of war, gun shots echoed.
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:26
Jessie climbed onto her boat of toys. Her eyes were shown memorable gifts; her feet felt the softest fabric.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:26
Olivia - what a sad journey to be on! What would you have done to end up on a boat of misfortune?
Malachi Chorley St james
10:26
A boat made out of bones
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:26
What was this boat like Malachi?
Mrs James
10:26
Gavin at Bispham Drive School - Your description is very detailed, well done.  It reminds me of the 'Black Pearl' in Pirates of the Caribbean.
Becca
10:26
Throughout the boat of optimism drifted beads of opportunity
Freya pensby primary school
10:27
In my boat of shadows the moonlight night sky shone down brightly on the spooky shadows.
Naomi
10:27
On the boat made from dandelions, a whirlwind of butterflies flutter around the mast.
Tilly Palace Wood.
10:27
The boat starts to rise. The cold, refreshing wind whips through my long winding hair. It feels magical.
Rosie
10:27
A boat made of time
Kit -Weldon Ce Primary School
10:27
On the boat of hope , I knew I was safe .
Nirav Warren road primary school
10:27
on the boat  of fire peace burns away
Jonah Freizland school
10:27
Sachin- love it
Hayden Summerfields
10:27
On the boat of shadows, there is darkness towering over me causing fear to shiver through my bones
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:27
Bispham Drive School I love the phrase 'bejeweled with skulls'
Mr Clark @ Chorley St James
10:27
Lovely idea Malachi - see if you can add more description like Mr Mitchell has asked.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:28
Hayden - great description! The idea of darkness towering over me is very scary!
Mrs James
10:29
Nirav from Warren Road Primary School - well done for using the senses in your writing.  You have described the sound of the wind; what did it feel like on your face?
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:29
Kit -Weldon Ce Primary School what a positive image - I love the idea of hope sailing around
Mr Clark @ Chorley St James
10:29
Hayden - 'darkness towering' is very effective.
Mrs James
10:30
Rosie.  I wonder how I would know your boat was made of time when I looked at it.
Archie-Long Row Primary
10:40
On the boat of poisonous candy floss, if anyone dares to take over the ship they are instantly trapped in a world of sweet dreams.
Kit -Weldon Ce Primary School
10:40
On the boat of time , I knew I would have fun
Dean Binnie
10:40
Enticing pirates to come aboard unaware of the danger that awaits them.
Utkarsha-Warren Road.
10:40
The boat was made out of misfortune. Where ever you go who will be drowned.
Ellie R Stockland Primary
10:40
Sweet chocolate mould, melting in the sun. where they going to sink? The sail made of a thin slice of the best Victoria sponge, steering wheel made of a rosy red strawberry lace.
Bispham Drive School
10:40
The boat of golden silk smoothly glides towards the hazy horizon.  Erin
Amelia R home lingfield primary
10:40
This boat saved cities from bombs and poppys are now on it because of the war and were the people who died saving this have of the world.
from rowde academy, wilts
10:40
Jersey-My boat is enchanted forest of magical tree's in a whole room made of enchanted potion's.
Shreesha
10:40
Really like everybody's idea.
jensen
10:41
On a boat of magic layed a old man that fished all the time but the thing was he only cached  gems
Sam SwW
10:41
And they are found and thrown to earth bellow.
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