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3rd June Show
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AvatarDavid Mitchell
7:27
Good morning Bloggers! Welcome to this LIVE writing session. Please add your first name and school name in the name box and don't post anything until you have heard all the instructions from David and Pie.
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*** Wednesday, June 3 ***
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:13
Start your sentences with:
I can see
I can hear
Freya pensby primary school
10:13
I could here the car horns beeping loudly.
Chloe-SWW
10:13
I can see, people rushing about.
Olivia N
10:14
I can her cars engins roring
Rosie
10:14
I can hear the hustle and bustle of the city down below.
Utkarsha-Warren Road
10:14
I can see buildings stand out in the city like thorns on a bramble bush.
Mrs Kilgour
10:14
Freya - here or hear?
Emily Lady Elizabeth Hastings
10:14
I can see sky scrapers towering in the sky
Eliza W Stockland primary
10:14
I can see the football stadium empty as ever.
Sebastien SwW
10:14
I can see the lake and hear the birds calling
India (Pensby Primary)
10:14
I could hear the birds tweeting loudly.
Sachin-Warren Road
10:14
Deep in the hustle and bustle of the city, the traffic jam had become worse. The fog was so thick it was as if someone had plastic wrapped the sky. The traffic light illuminations were practically invisible. Now, the situation was more awful- rain hammered onto the car roofs.
Kit -Weldon ce primary school
10:15
I can see the glorious,giant Tottenham Hotspur Stadium.
Ollie Summerfieldss
10:15
I can see skyscrapers filling the sky
Amelia R Home Lingfield primary
10:15
I can see skyscrapers made out of glass and iron.
Isla
10:15
I can see the giant cityscape stretched across the broad land.
Emily-Oaksey Class3
10:15
I can hear the hustle and bustle of people going to the shops. I can see the police put tickets on peoples cars.
Theo Norton Fitzwarren
10:15
I can smell the fumes from the traffic that slowly moves.
Edith
10:15
I can see towering buildings standing up proud.
Mrs Kilgour
10:15
India - name the birds - what type of birds would you find in a city?
Mrs Carr Warren Road
10:15
The cacophony of capitalist commercialism reverberated against the windows.
Emily Lady Elizabeth Hastings
10:15
I can hear birds in the sky
keerat
10:15
I can see the gloomy mist swallowing the city.
JessW LylaB Micklefield 6M
10:15
I can see smoke and gas building up by my window
Chloe-SWW
10:15
I can hear, the engine wirs.
Olivia
10:15
I can see car people going to work
Rosie
10:15
I can see as far as the country side.
CJ
10:15
I can see a man leaning on the corner shop, smoking, while begging for money
Olivia N
10:15
I can hear cars roaring
Seth
10:16
I can see towering blocks of flats, grime splattered and mud stained.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary
10:16
I can see the spires of skyscrapers, tickling the clouds. I regret living in a city, I regret moving to a different place.
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:16
I can see a megatropilis in a small building
Mrs Kilgour
10:16
Writers - remember your full stops!
Izzy SWW
10:16
I can see the balcony's of the flat block.
Samantha
10:16
I can see shops and people chattering loudly
Katie R @Stockland Primary
10:16
I can hear cows mooing and the faint sound of cars going slowly down the road.
Pen Pen
10:16
I can hear people chatting from people on the street below as I look out my loft window.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:16
I can see the skyscrapers looming over me, blocking out the sun
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