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Mrs James
10:18
Harry, I used to love scrambling as a child - try and use another word instead of scrambling twice in the sentence.
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:18
I can see every colour of the rainbow in unbrellas.
JessW LylaB Micklefield 6M
10:18
I can see the smoke running from the floor up to their sky home
Toby, Tatsfield Primary
10:18
I can see sky scrapers towering over the buildings huddled below.
Sofia W
10:18
I can hear the pitter-pattering of feet stamping on the hard ground
Seth
10:18
I smell the thick, clogging fumes that snake up my nostrils
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:19
Try some 'I regret' sentences...
Emily, Manor field
10:19
I can see skyscrapers towering imposingly above me, their glass panes glinting in the evening sun.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:19
Seth - 'snake up my nostrils' is a great phrase!
amanda
10:19
I can see the skyscrapers stretching into the sky like arms outstretched.
Mrs Kilgour
10:19
Lucas - 'sprawled' is a very detailed verb that shows me exactly what the cat is doing.
Mrs Shirtliff
10:19
Edith, standing up proud - great description. maybe a simile too?
Sachin
10:19
The maddening traffic immobilised many a restless soul in the city’s hustle and bustle. Obscured traffic light illuminations, a plastic-wrapped sky and unyielding honks marked the day. The radio weather forecast spoke about the smog attack on the city, with hammering rain on the car roofs to top it all!
Jess@John Moore Primary
10:19
I can hear kids screaming while playing tag.
Mrs Kilgour
10:19
Toby - I love 'huddled' as a verb choice.
Alice Q
10:19
I can feel the sharp winds of cars speeding past.
Jennifer Minchinhampton Academy
10:19
I can hear the wind crashing against the buildings.
Sachi
10:19
I can hear the ping of the train doors closing.
Benjamin sww
10:19
I saw the rush hour.
India (Pensby Primary)
10:20
I can see the ink splashing onto the paper. I thought to myself “I need to start again”.
Ida
10:20
I can see the distant hills with green grass.
Mrs James
10:20
Toby, great image of buildings being huddled with sky scrapers looking down on them.  What else can you see from a height?  Think of yourself as a drone.  Or use Google Earth to see a landscape from above.  Anthony Horowitz used this idea in the book he read to us.
Rosie, be specific.  What do you see in the countryside.
Utkarsha-Warren Road
10:20
I can smell the fuel and greenhouse gases rise in the air.
Tilly Palace Wood
10:20
I can smell the oily smell of the cars, the sound of the city waking. I can see skyscrapers towering above us. The cars look miniature from the height of the tallest building.
Rosie
10:20
I can see skyscrapers like jagged claws of darkness in the dark.
Larraine Harrison
10:20
Sebastien - can you name the lake and extend it?  - what birds - a good start
Melody - Summerfields
10:20
I can see huge buildings towering over me
Rebecca From Brunel Class
10:20
I can see the skyscrapers almost flying there so high.
Mrs Kilgour
10:20
Jennifer - why is the wind crashing against the buildings? Can you explain that a little by adding the next sentence?
Anastasia Class 3
10:20
I can hear birds singing there hearts out.
Miss Man@John Moore Primary
10:20
I saw a man staring straight at me with his telescope as I stared at him with my telescope.
Clunie
10:20
I can see the grey buildings looming over the busy people and cars below, I can hear the revving of car engines and the beep of horns, I can smell petrol and dirty air.
Mrs James
10:20
Seth, why are the flats splattered with mud?
Theo Norton Fitzwarren
10:20
I can hear the horns from the angry drivers
Olivia
10:20
I can hear cars racing down the bumpy steep roads
Mrs James
10:20
Rosie - skyscrapers look really different at night.  When we look at a tall building at night, what do we see?
Archie westfield school
10:20
I can see lots of people rushing about trying to get to work or where they need to be
kailen summerfields
10:20
i can see crows sat on top of skyscrapers
Harriet stillness
10:20
I can see rows of houses and speckles of trees.
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