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George Llandogo
10:26
I can hear the rustle of leaves on the trees, and I can hear buskers playing their beautiful songs.
Benjamin Warren Road Primary
10:26
I can see the miniscule cars: ants rushing to get to a safe place.
Amelia
10:26
Skyskrapers stand tall as pigeons flap and flutter through the air .
Mrs Wright
10:26
Bethany, I like how you've described your 'regret'. It really hooks the reader in!
Tilly Palace Wood
10:26
I can smell the oily cars roaring below. The skyscrapers are as high as Mount Everest. The cars look miniature from the tallest building. The hustle and bustle show that the city s a busy place.
Theo Norton Fitzwarren
10:26
I can see people huddled in the coats rushing in and out of shops
Emily W Summerfields
10:26
I smell the putrid smells of pollution seeping through my mouth
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:26
The once full orchard was filled with the skeletons of trees. All I can see is a hooded boy flitting through the trees.
Toby, Tatsfield Primary
10:26
I can hear a police helicopter whirring busily overhead like a mechanical wasp.
Harry Pensby Primary
10:26
I can hear sirens of police cars and people yelling so loud, they could break glass.
Samantha
10:26
I regret ever crawling to the moving van and slumping in my heavy suitcases.
Beatrix@John Moore Primary
10:26
I remember looking out my window, watching, wandering, waiting but now, everything has changed.
Amelia R Home Lingfield primary
10:26
I can see a lego set with no lego in.#
India (Pensby Primary)
10:26
I regret eating a lot of cake on my birthday. I felt sick. 🤢
Ted K.B Lionel Primary School
10:26
I regret living right next to a football stadium.
Mrs Kilgour
10:26
Toby - great simile!
Kit -Weldon ce primary school
10:26
The polluted air snuggled up my nose .
Larraine Harrison
10:26
Harry - Pensby Primary - can you think of another word so you don't write scrambler twice? - like the idea.
Shreesha
10:26
I can see people behaving like donkeys and donkeys like humans.
Nicholas Sing'ombe Warren Road
10:26
I can hear cars honking their horns at me.
Izzy SWW
10:27
I can see the tallest of the city's buildings over towering the rest of the buildings.
Jaden Sacred-Heart Battersea
10:27
From the top of the tower block I can see cars driving by the road preceding our house.
Mrs Kilgour
10:27
Ted - I love how you have extended your football idea!
Lucas Boothman
10:27
I can see the rain showering from the sky and dripping onto the pavement. It is getting really slippery and that's when I saw... A GHOST!!!
Melody - Summerfields
10:27
I can smell deisel and thick fumes as i walk along the apvement
Miles@John Moore Primary
10:27
I can see a storm towering over us.  The clouds were grey, ready to fire drops of water.
Mrs James
10:27
Phoebe, great figurative language - "skeleton of trees."  I can really picture your setting.
Lyra and Henry
10:27
I can smell the hot pavement sizzling as cool, fresh rain patters down.
Rebecca From Brunel Class
10:27
I can hear the wind whistling through the trees.
Gregory SPS
10:27
I regret climbing to the top of a tower and looking down.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary
10:27
I remember the day after we got here, Mum falling silent, forgetting, and Jake Moore bullying me for my Indian inheritance.
Lucy
10:27
I can see the grass dancing in the breeze.
Ollie Summerfields
10:27
I can see clouds covering up the sun like cars filling the roads
Kit -Weldon ce primary school
10:27
I can see the darkness of a shadow
Emily Lady Elizabeth Hastings
10:27
I regret moving into this busy, crowded town
Louie summerfields
10:27
I can see skyscrapers tower over the city almost blocking out the sun completely.
Nidharshna
10:27
The skyscrapers are as tall as a giant girraffe.
kailen summerfields
10:27
i can see plants climbing the buildings
Ida
10:27
I feel the rush of air as cars zoom past my window.
Utkarsha-Warren Road
10:27
I regret coming to the city as greenhouse gases rise and spoil the scent of roses.
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