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8th June Show
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AvatarDavid Mitchell
9:13
Good morning Bloggers. Please wait until you have heard your instructions before submitting any sentences. The sentence you will need for this session is:
She missed the warm scent of orange blossom; this new school just smelt of the city streets.
Sachin-Warren Road
10:16
He missed the adrenaline of playing cricket at home. Here, all children were football addicts. Nobody to play with-he yearned to go back to his home country, without the war.
10:17
Everybody glared at me. I looked different, different skin shade, eye colour and everything. I felt like I needed to paint my face to look like them.
Miss Hall
10:18
I held my breath as I walked through the ominous blue doors. Everyone bustled around but seemed to know exactly where they needed to be heading. I just stood as still as I could trying to blend with the wall.
Arthur SWW
10:18
She missed the mud and straw school rooms, here everything was constructed out concrete and glass.
Olly W. from LEH School
10:18
He missed the sharp smell of grenades from the frontlines. Here, the streets of London were torn from the air raids. No one was used to it.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:18
Adults, please do comment on the children's writing if you can..
Archie, Westfield primary school
10:19
He missed his regular life, having friends to talk to: but now they are not there with him.
Sachin-Warren Road
10:19
I needed to fit in- and fast.
Ida
10:19
I glared at the hall heaving with loud chatty children; I missed the quietness of my garden at home.
Axel
10:19
As I walked through the doors, everybody stared at me all of a sudden.
Sachi
10:19
She longed to fit in. She was different from everybody else. She would never fit in.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary
10:19
Lille sat at her desk and blushed deeply. Nobody looked like her, sounded like her or even liked her. She felt lonely- no-one would understand.
Freya pensby primary school
10:19
I was lonely
Mrs H Bispham Drive Junior
10:19
Jeevan longed for the warm earth of his home between his toes instead of this frost bitten, damp playground.
Nicholas Sing'ombe Warren Road
10:19
I held me breath. Everything was different. I was like a fish in a sea of sharks...
Chloe-SWW
10:19
She missed the warm scent of the homelike mist, this new school just smelt of the cold grass.
Sachin-Warren Road
10:19
I missed the velvet seats we had back at home. Here we sat on dirty, creaking and shivering wooden beams.
Milly
10:19
at my nursery Jack and Jill's we just got to play all day
Nina S-H
10:19
She walked into the room everyone stared the girl looked down at her shoes. She was very shy.
Mrs D
10:19
Sachin - The repetition of different is very effective
10:20
Ida - The contrast of the loud chatty hall and the quietness of the garden is very effective.
Alice Q
10:20
She missed the colourful birds that visited the garden. The birds here were dull and the people even duller.
Micklefield 6M
10:20
I used to fit in with everyone around me, but now I stand out like a sore thumb.
Mrs Murrin
10:20
constructed out of Arthur- check before you post
Amelia.E
10:20
The house was empty, the rooms echoed. I stood in my new bedroom thinking what were the scratches on the wall from.
Benjamin sww
10:20
When I saw someone  I ran away.
Rosie Hall SwW
10:20
I stepped into my class room feeling scared.
Emily, Manor field
10:20
She missed playing with her little brother, Alex, under the lush,emerald trees;here, everyone was just gaming addicts.
Mrs James
10:20
Archie - why couldn't his new friends chat with him?  Is it because they didn't understand each other's words?
keith
10:20
There eyes twitched blankly at me as if I were a new species of toad and nobody knew what I was or what language I spoke.
Edith
10:20
The city didn't smell of mangos or passion fruit. He missed his friends and his family. But this was the safest place to live.
Elliott Westfield School
10:20
I walked into the room, I saw hundreds of eyes staring at me and I knew that this would be bad.
Mrs James
10:20
Bethany - This reminds me of the opening of a book called, 'Carrie's War'.  Carrie, is an evacuee, who blushes when she has to go into the hall to meet people she doesn't know.  Well done.
Stan
10:20
I stepped into the room and my world changed, the weight of looking eyes seemed to drag me down.
India (Pensby Primary)
10:20
I missed my old friends back at home. I missed the smell of the yellow sand and the cold wind blowing in my face. I was happy there. Here, I don’t think I’ll ever fit in.
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:20
I miss the lovely feeling of making daisy chains, the feeling of feeding my horses. Here. everything was different. There was no grass, no comfort, just cars and concrete.
Izzy SWW
10:21
She missed the sweet smell of the blossom in the spring.
Samuel
10:21
Everyone stared at me. I was petrified. I sat at my desk sared for my life. i tried to blend in but it just didnt work..
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