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Erin W SWW
10:21
Walking in to my new school, I could already smell the rechid school dinners.
Kailen_Summerfields
10:21
He missed the smell of campfires,  in his new school everything smelt fresh
Oakleigh Summerfields
10:21
I missed how my old house had a really nice yellow cream, now my new house has a smell of damp wallpapers.
Miss Hall
10:21
Well done Arthur, I like how you contrasted the materials of the buildings, perhaps you could comment on the size and scale as well?
Miss Man@John Moore Primary
10:21
Peering from behind my long fringe, I quickly realised I had to walk past the group of people wearing dark blue hoodies.  In my last school, they all wore bright red tops.
Lily SWW
10:21
Everyone stared at Me as I walked through the row of tables to get to Miss Mumble.
Mrs Kilgour
10:21
Nicholas - great contrast in your simile.
Lewis Stone School
10:21
He missed the scent of the countryside: this new school smells of polluted air of London.
Elsie - WHPS
10:21
She missed the animals in the meadow; now that she is living in the city, the only animals surrounding her are rats and mice.
Mrs James
10:21
Micklefied - Great contrast.  How else did the main character stand out?
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:21
I like the idea of these sentences split between past memories and present....looking forward to reading these!
Freya pensby primary school
10:21
I was lonely. I had no friends. My hope of finding new friends was shattered.
Shreesha
10:21
I tiptoed through the door, didn't want the Minotaur to sense me and come running with anger.
Isla
10:21
As I wandered around the classroom, every pair of eyes turned to stare at me.
Sachin-Warren Road
10:21
Ahmet did like the classroom- just it was not like the previous one at home...
Abigail
10:21
As she walked in everyone gasped ; of the huge scar on her burnt skin. And the state of her clothes .
Amelia.E
10:21
The church was silent, everyone praying heads down.
Mrs Kilgour
10:21
Keith - I love the idead of the toad - is it there or their?
Devon
10:21
I was used to people rushing around the school, but this place was almost empty. Trying to navigate the school is like trying to navigate the national space station.
Hilldene
10:21
I missed the greetings and friendly faces: this new school just smelt of loneliness and fear.
Georgina
10:21
On the way too, school I kept telling myself that everything would be fine and by the end of the day I would have loads of friends. But as I walked into the classroom I could tell I was wrong...
Rowde primary school
10:21
Jersey-  She felt the sharp corner of the building with pain.
Will
10:21
As he walked through the classroom doors, every eye in the room was on me like they were in a bubble and i was not allowed in.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:21
Freya - I like the two short sentences to start - very powerful.
emily LEH
10:21
I held my breath felt like being drowned in a sharks tank...
Mrs James
10:22
Emily - in your next sentence, explain how she knew these people were gaming addicts.
Jamie- cams lane primary school
10:22
My bed, my wardrobe, the furniture,was all the same, yet the yellow vivid like the sun, burnt my eyes.
Guest
10:22
I felt the world turning with my heart roaring like a lion .
Jane
10:22
As I entered the cold,harsh-lit room, all eyes focused my way and bore into my fragile soul.
Chloe-SWW
10:22
I had missed the whir of engines and the red light, in Korea, but here there was no sound.
Emily - Summerfields Primary
10:22
Tension seemed to be towering over me as the other children stared hauntingly at me, I missed the warm sent of honey blossom but now,all i can smell is the thick smoke of the factory's...
Miss Tobin
10:22
No matter which face I looked at, I knew no-one ... not one familiar face.
Harry WHPS
10:22
I Miss the smell of the the fish and chip shop on Friday where all i can smell now is the air coming through the window
Lucas
10:22
Lucas sat at his desk scared because of the new school he new they  all looked at him he needed a new friend.
Mrs Kilgour
10:22
Jane - what was this room? Who do all the eyes belong to?
Jake@John Moore Primary
10:22
He missed the warm glow of the sun; here, there sun was blocked by towering skyscrapers.He longed to go home.
Mrs Murrin
10:22
Who did you see Benjamin?
Jackson
10:22
He missed the warm feeling of scoring a goal; here it seems sports is not a feeling
Mrs Kilgour
10:22
Rosie - why scared? Can you add more?
George Martin -WR 5A
10:23
He missed his old city,his old school and his old house,here he wasn't anybody he was just different
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