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Laura Moores
4:10
Hello Year 6,
5:31
Look at the image above, can you use interesting words to describe the snow on the roof tops?
Kulsum and Zayan
5:33
The crystal, white snow glazed the top of the roofs of the houses of Barcelona.
Saleeka&Hussain
5:33
HI
Fragile, white snow flakes trickled down the windows of Canada
Amberin and Amina
5:34
The clouds cried twinkling, beautiful snowflakes that danced in the air with the wind before laying down to rest on the high rooftops of Iceland.
Eman & Ahad
5:34
The crystal , fluffy like snowflakes glided onto the icy rooftops of Barcelona.
Laura Moores
5:35
I like the idea of the snowflakes dancing Amberin and Amina.
Kulsum and Zayan
5:35
The fragile snowflakes fell onto the rooftops as gentle as can be.
Devon Abdullah
5:38
As The snow glided down on the slanted tiles which lazily sits there
Fatima And Mubarra
5:38
One peaceful morning, the fluffy, fragile snowflakes slid upon the rooftops of the lonely town of Barcelona.
Safa ,Ahmed
5:39
The snow dazzling with happiness coming down from the sky as gentle as can be .
Amberin and Amina
5:39
"Woo hoo!" I shrieked as I flew with the wind. I wasn't expecting such a bumpy landing though! (As a snowflake)
Sajjad and Hafsa
5:39
The steady downward spiral of snowflakes was mesmerizing, peaceful on the roof top
Laura Moores
5:40
Well done everyone, you have used some excellent describing words for the snow.
Kulsum and Zayan
5:40
The icy rooftops shined in the rays of the sun.
Fatima And Mubarra
5:40
The soft snow shivered through the cold air of Barcelona.
Maariya Sandor
5:40
Falling from the Candy Floss were crystal white snow flakes .
Emily and Breshna
5:40
The crystal white snow trickled down onto the frozen jagged rooftops as the snow fell gently onto the floor to rest.
Kulsum and Zayan
5:41
The isolated paths of Barcelona were filled with fluffy snow.
Mahanoor
5:41
Floating elegantly and beautifully, the delicate snowflakes danced above the rooftops of Spain on an icy Winter's day.
Miss Moores
5:45
Ok, now can you describe Alma on the 2nd picture.
Safa ,Ahmed
5:45
The streets full of snow as she skips joyfully along the snowy streets .
Eman & Ahad
5:45
The candyfloss like snowflakes hurried to land onto the glazed rooftops of Barcelona.
Safa ,Ahmed
5:46
snow as tender and as gentle as can be
Eman & Ahad
5:46
The elegant , diamond snowflakes danced in the air  drifting down onto the icy rooftops.
Amberin and Amina
5:46
I like how you presented the sentence in a different way Mahanoor!
Mahanoor
5:46
A young girl ,by the name of Alma, wandered the paths of Barcelona, hoping to find something interesting for once.
Sajjad and Hafsa
5:47
Alma is a little girl who ventures into town in the snow.
Amberin and Amina
5:47
Safa and Ahmed don't forget your capital letters!
Eman & Ahad
5:47
Safa and Ahmad I love the way the snow skips joyfully.
Mahanoor I love it !
Saleeka&Hussain
5:47
Fragile white snowflakes trickle down the windows of Canada, the people of the Canadian town were sleeping innocently, except one little girl.
Emily and Breshna
5:49
A young girl who is happily skipping along the crunchy snow has a grey bobbly hat on her head with a nice bright pink coat with green trousers and her lovely green eyes just lights up her face!!!!!!!
Miss Moores
5:49
Emily and Breshna, you must remember punctuation!
Rebeka and Gift
5:49
The bright, clear snow flake dropped on the ice roof top.
Kulsum and Zayan
5:50
Alma was her name, small and cute she was  but also was adventurous and had a lot of curiosity.
Amberin and Amina
5:50
Saleeka and Hussain, I like how you've used suspense in the sentence! I love it!
Saleeka&Hussain
5:50
The little girl, who was wearing a pink gillet matching her pink cheeks and her button liked nose, was skipping along the isolated streets of Barcelona.
Eman & Ahad
5:50
Saleeka and Hussain I love the way
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