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8:56
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8:57
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*** Thursday, May 14 ***
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
7:38
Gingerly, warily, Mathilde stepped into the dark, abandoned warehouse and stared around at its crumbling walls.
Sachin
7:38
Hesitantly, Lilian creaked the oil-needing door.
Michael V-kyilla primary school
7:39
Mickle walked in slowly his body froze even more every time he took a step
Austin W
7:39
A unbbaned basement that is crawling with snakes and spiders
sophie.s Aveley primary school
7:39
sophie opens the door... you hear foot steps .
Saskia H
7:39
Stuck in the basement of the dark stone mansion, she called out with a faint cry before being hit in the chest with something in a blaze of flames...
Aveley Primary- Mrs Williamson
7:39
The door creaked open slowly. Cautiously, Jane stepped into the dark room.
Sachin
7:39
Maggots were crawling across the dusty corners of the ramshackle cottage and sepia papyrus papers were scattered across the floor.
Mackenzie A-H A.P.S
7:39
The door creaked open as Kenzie walked in  she saw....
ethan
7:40
creaking the door open Ethan had a glimpse on all the pigs
Yifan
7:40
Brownie looked around the room and saw filthy furniture and a chicken nugget on the floor.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
7:40
A small shaft of daylight shone down from a hole in the ceiling and Mathilde glimpsed a cloaked person up above. (I chose gingerly Pie)
Mr Sutton
7:40
What did she see, mackenzie?
Ethanm can you punctuate your sentence?
Mr Walker
7:40
Sophie- love hearing the footsteps. They are an empty word that makes me wonder who they belong to.
Riley N
7:40
Trapped in the castles basement light shines though the cell
Sachin
7:40
The shadows of the broken antique furniture were like looming beasts waiting to pounce.
Isaac
7:40
Jason gaped around the room, the dimly lit walls cracked and dusty; looking closer, he could see a dark figure creeping towards him.
Mr Walker
7:40
Yifan- I like the alliteration ‘filthy furniture’
Michael V-kyilla primary school
7:40
Mickle walked in slowly, his body froze even more every time he took a step.
Tyler challis primary
7:40
Quickly tom is ran but he felled down to the old crumbly basement.
Sunny
7:40
As I open the door I see the ordinary room. Just then something creeked and the roof broke open.
Maxine - Kyilla Primary School
7:40
Creeping and opening the creaky door, Harold had a glimpse of the dark room. Silently, He crept towards the centre of the room.
Carrie APS
7:40
Lily walked through the cob webs To get to they abondened basement
Sophie
7:40
Alix looked  around the room where am I
Lauren APS
7:41
The door opened slowly....Quietly Emma walked in and she fell
Mr Sutton
7:41
Isaac, can you read your sentence aloud? Would you change anything?
Liam
7:41
I looked around the eerie room. Terrified i froze.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary School
7:41
Mathilde dived behind an oil drum and attempted to quieten her breathing; scared that the person might find her...
Lexie APS
7:41
The door creaked open slowly Olivia walked in she gasped in shock when she saw.....
Lana APS
7:41
Light beamed through the door as I woke up to the sound of a bomb exploding.
Erin Mclellen A.P.S
7:41
The dull Brocken door creaked as soon as as I, Erin walked through and when I stepped in the door shut but then split open and cracked .
James.H APS
7:41
Jimmy opened the door. It was very creaky it was very cold in there. I heard wood falling.. I walked out the door.
Emma
7:42
Emma hides in the dark shadow as the door creeks open.
Catherine Perth
7:42
Carefully, Jack pushed the heavy door and saw a dusty, dark, damp, cellar under the castle.
Nicholas Kyilla
7:42
The room was abandoned. Alex walked in and then...!
Mr Walker
7:42
Sunny: Good effort! I like that the room is ordinary to start with.
Rhys (challis)
7:42
She saw a monster in the basement
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