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Miss Williams
9:58
Good afternoon Y5!
ETHANC
10:00
Hi Miss Williams
Miss Williams
10:00
Vlera
10:00
Hello!
Miss Williams
10:00
Can you describe what is happening in this photo?
Vlera
10:01
Volcanoes erupting with rage unexpectedly. People run in terror of this magical raging monster.
Miss Williams
10:01
Vlera- What can you hear?
Vlera
10:02
I hear crackling fires springing into action.
ETHANC
10:02
It looks like a giant eruption that has bursts of fire spitting out of it.
Miss Williams
10:03
Ethan- What can you hear?
Vlera- What would you do?
Vlera
10:04
I would run in terror! But also enjoy the memorising view.
Miss Williams
10:04
Vlera- What makes it so memorising?
Shannon
10:04
Hot lava shooting devouring any thing in it's path.
Miss Williams
10:05
Shannon- Fantastic use of personification! What would happen to the things in its path?
ETHANC
10:05
I hear springing bursts of fire doing there thing
Vlera
10:05
The crackling fires popping against the air. It's calming if you ask me.
Evie
10:05
Hi!
Miss Williams
10:05
Hi Evie! Nice of you to join us:)
kacie
10:05
steaming lava pouring from the sky like a fire work
Miss Williams
10:06
Kacie- Well done! Great use of a simile
Ethan- great description, but have your used the right word for 'there'
Vlera
10:06
Hey Shannon! I loved your amazing sentence. Anything is a joined word.
Evie
10:06
:)
Miss Williams
10:07
Shannon
10:08
Anything in the way of this monstrous lava will be burnt like a crisp
kacie
10:08
a sailor in the sea shooting at the volcano begging not to die and sailing as fast he can
ETHANC
10:08
It looks like a dark fatal volcano that hasn't erupted for years
Vlera
10:08
Black ash filling the air. Lungs tighten and short breaths appear. Rocks jumping of ledges and ash prancing in the air.
Evie
10:08
I finished my slide so I came on  here hello people
Vlera
10:08
Hello Evie!
Miss Williams
10:08
Kacie- Fantastic writing! What would he be trying to get away from?
scott
10:09
what is that??
Evie
10:09
I am going back on my slide bye guys!
Miss Williams
10:09
Ethan C- Super! What do you think would happen if it did?
Guest
10:09
hello
Vlera
10:09
Angelic white clouds form into Black devilish clouds.
Miss Williams
10:10
Hello Brendan- Don't forget to put a name to your writing
Shannon
10:10
Dark, misty ash gliding in the air blocking the reach of a breath.
kacie
10:11
he would be trying to get away from the purring lava falling from the sky  the sailor begging for his life try to get away
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brendan
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2:11
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It looks like a crzy explosion of smke
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