JotCast | Experiment with using a colon to introduce a list that then uses semi-colons to separate the items to avoid becoming muddled. | 6/8/2021

Experiment with using a colon to introduce a list that then uses semi-colons to separate the items to avoid becoming muddled.

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Henry

5:32

Then he saw it: a black stripy body; a snarling face showing razor sharp teeth; and a two ears listening, for prey.

Cameron SWW

5:32

Then it happened: the blood curdling ten second countdown echoed; sirens rang; and the volcano erupted.

India SWW Y6

5:32

Then she saw it : a table full with nothing but junk

Jake+SWW

5:32

Just then he spotted it: a draw of golden coins; the shadow of one's wallet and a fresh packet of whispering spirits.

Zoe SWW

5:32

Then she saw it: never ending trees crowding the hilltops; fields of gold blanketing the floor; and rows of hedges all in single file.

Axel SWW

5:32

Then it happened: the table was made fully out of cheese.

Charlie SWW school

5:32

Then Danny saw it : a desk was covered with bread ; a piece of creamy butter ; and a box of doughy donut.

Olivia+ Cameron

5:33

Then he saw it: the peeling paint on the shed door; the rusty handles creaking in the wind; and the magic dust floating through the air.

Tulisa

5:35

Then he saw it: a coffin shape of chocolate with glitter dust. Was it safe to eat?

Sarah Murrin

5:35

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Freya SWW

5:35

Then she saw it: a table stacked with books; an empty plate with crumbs; and a block of cheese on the counter.

Elana SWW

5:36

Then I saw it: a dark figure emerging through the dark; its everlasting look of fear stared at me; and nothing happened. I froze with fear and the figure stared: not blinking, not speaking and not moving. What was going to happen?

Vienna SWW

5:36

Then she saw it: a shadow creeping up the wall; the golden fields outside turning black; and peeling paint on the walls.

Olivia+ Cameron

5:36

Then it happened: the oil leaked; fire hungrily crackled; and the car exploded.

Bobby SWW

5:36

Then the unexpected happen: the road suddenly turned into lava.

Axel SWW

5:36

Then Tom saw the room: it had many beautiful caving's of elves.

India SWW Y6

5:37

Then she saw it : a table covered with junk; a pen that doesn't even work; and a peas of paper that has all ready been used.

LILY SWW

5:37

Then he saw it; a shadow walking around the room; a candle flickering; and floorboards creaking.

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