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Tyler
9:03
I think,the castle is the home of vampires[wumpires.]The road to the castle is scary because, if you fall off,it will hurt.I think it is abandoned.
Mr Taylor
9:03
Create some more atmosphere. what is the weather doing.
Lexi
9:03
the castle looks so creepy and it looks like a haunted house..........
Mr Taylor
9:03
Wonderful. Now describe another piece of the castle and add it on
violet
9:03
hello
nyema
9:06
the carcel is sceary i think its sceary  and  ugly and not pritty i think its horntid
Mr Taylor
9:06
check your pellings and add your punctuation. Great description.
aaron
9:07
:) Mr Taylor it,s very haunted and scaryyyyyy  and the trees are sboocyyyyy and the bats on the trees and if they were a vampier I woodnot  jump of I wood jump over the vampier and run and drive a wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy. :)
Mr Taylor
9:07
Where should the commas be? I'm now getting scared. Can you add the weather into your description.
Dennis
9:08
This looks like a house with 4 tentacles sticking out of it and have sun lights that burning its eyes and making blacks sky like a candy floss maker but in the inside and the outside looks like a old graveyard with scary floating things inside and vampires with bold pale heads as bold as a sun with black clothes and a torches burning with in the house with spooky webs.
Ebony
9:08
This palace looks like a rusty ancient  dentist that hasten been used in 5,000 years and P.S this haunted palace has all sorts of zombies and vampires
Mr Taylor
9:08
great simile. Add the weather into your description.
Mr Taylor
9:09
You come to a door. Describe it. How do you feel?
isla
9:11
this makes me feel scared because what if there scary things in there.
Emily
9:12
it is as scary as a haunted person.   spookyyyy ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mr Taylor
9:12
How does it make you feel?
Lexi
9:13
the castle is so dark and it isnt that good of the wether  there and it is sooooooo creepy it looks like it is friday the 15........
Mr Taylor
9:13
Be more accurate with your description. Talk about the windows and turrets as well as the weather.
olaf
9:14
The weather is terrible
Mr Taylor
9:14
Now tell me about the castle. Make me scared.
nyema
9:14
the dorre is creepy as a witch
Mr Taylor
9:14
Door. Lovely simile. What colour is it, what does it feel like.
Mr Taylor
9:17
Use all your senses sight, smell, touch, hearing
Jodi-Leigh
9:17
the tree is as dead as a pellet on a flower. the castle is as dirty as a rubbish bin. the weather is as miserable as a person that is tied also the road is as bumpy as a tortes-es shell.
Mr Taylor
9:17
Capital letters. Great similes.  Now use all your senses.
Nyema
9:17
hi its me
Dennis
9:20
When i look at this door i feel like im in a movie because it looks old and i see the day light shining through the window wich is a GIANT! and i fell scared because its got the fell its silent smells like wide something could attack at any moment  with them clouds on the out side it and then i touch the wooden door it feels old
Mr Taylor
9:20
Wonderful. now comment on someone else.
olaf
9:20
this picture looks like the door has been there for 10000 years also it looks like alot of bad spirits been there thats how scary it is...
Mr Taylor
9:20
Tell me exactly what it looks like
Lexi
9:20
the castle is so dark and it isnt that good of the wether  there and it is sooooooo creepy it looks like it is friday the 15.
Mr Taylor
9:21
Paulla
9:21
The castle looks as abandoned and haunted as an ancient hospital that hasn't been touched for 109  years. The castle looks as spooky as slender man looking at you in every heart beat you have. The door looks as rusty and rotten out as if it's made out of nothing  but mold and looks as delicate as a china cup. The door is as stinky as mold that's made out of socks that has been dug up in dirt.
Ebony
9:21
I'm feeling a bit nervous because there might be a zombie or very poisonous or very dangerous vampires behind that door so wish me luck for when I go though (goes in door and shuts it) AAAAAAAAAAAAH
isla
9:22
the door is scary because it might be a portal of ghost and creepy things
Mr Taylor
9:22
This needs to be longer add some more description
isla
9:23
WAIT it the house for VAMPIRES yey i think i worked it out!!!!
Mr Taylor
9:23
Now describe them
Emily
9:25
It looks like a baricaded door because the light is the thing that makes it look like it is baricaded.
Mr Taylor
9:25
What other sentences could you use in your description.
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