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Nevaeh
1:33
The books lay rusty on the old ancient bookshelf.
Mrs Hamlin
1:38
Can books be rusty?
Grace-A
1:33
Hi Mrs Hamlin it is Grace a
Lee
1:33
Hello it's lee
lexie
1:34
Nevaeh i like youre sentence
Lee
1:34
A old fashioned libary
Mrs Hamlin
1:38
library
Kyle
1:34
In the basket there is golden waking stiks.
Mrs Hamlin
1:40
In the basket there were golden walking sticks.
Grace j
1:34
The room was as old as the man.
Mrs Hamlin
1:40
Maybe add a bit more?
Thomas
1:34
the bell what has not been rung in years
Mrs Hamlin
1:40
The bell had not been rung in years.
Joseph
1:34
The things in the room could be hundreds of years old
Mrs Hamlin
1:41
Perhaps! Is there a better word than "things"?
Nevaeh
1:34
Hello Lilly i like your sentence it is very descriptive.
Grace j
1:35
The little girls shoes squeaked like a Mouse.
Mrs Hamlin
1:41
Good simile!
Archie
1:35
As music plays the girl picks a old adventure book from acient times
Mrs Hamlin
1:42
Use "an" instead of "a" adventure book
Guest
1:36
Hi miss hamilin
Grace-A
1:36
I can see lots of rusty, old clocks
Neena
1:36
The golden chandelier glistened in the corner of my eye
Mrs Hamlin
1:43
glistened is very descriptive!
Joseph
1:36
I think the man is the owner of all of the things and has made a little shop with them
Guest
1:36
Hello miss hamlin its anthony
Charlie
1:36
The man was collecting old and rusty canes
Mrs Hamlin
1:45
Good!
Katie
1:37
There was piles of old, ancient and very delicate things from decades ago (including chests, clocks, game and much more)
Mrs Hamlin
1:45
Good brackets!
lexie
1:37
I like youre sentence Neena.
Nevaeh
1:37
Hi Grace j i love your sentence.
Grace j
1:37
The room was quiet until a book fell.
Mrs Hamlin
1:46
The room was quiet until a book clattered to the floor. (?)
Neena
1:37
Nevaeh i like your sentence
Grace j
1:38
Thank you Neveah !
lexie
1:39
The little boy stood there frozen.
Mrs Hamlin
1:47
The little boy stood there, frozen.
Joseph
1:39
They could be antiques because they look a bit delicate
Lewis
1:39
The great grandfather clock stud meters taller than the young girl
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