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Thomas
1:44
L.
Grace j
1:44
Thanks Grace Amelia!
heidi
1:44
The shandeleea wich hung from the sieling was allmost as old as him and the libary
Lily
1:45
The little girls head whizzed around the room full of curiosity,her head full of  wonder,reaching out high and low looking at what she can.
Archie
1:45
Charlie whereare the cookies in the tray its good but cant find
Lee
1:46
Kyle it's not accent it's just a book that people can look at and someone probably left it open
Joseph
1:46
Thats a good sentence Lily
Myles
1:46
Hi its myles
Nevaeh
1:46
Hi Joeseph i liked the way you compared the sun to a lightbulb.You could improve by adding more detail into your sentence.
Jeannie
1:46
Hi Lewis it is jeannie I love your senten
Anthony
1:48
There was a new neighbor next door and I'll you could here at night was help help!
heidi
1:48
The books were very dusty and interesting
Joseph
1:48
The little girl was astonished at how much amazing things there was.
Mrs Hamlin
1:48
Can we use other words instead of "stuff" and "things"?
Louie
1:48
The libary is older than the Queen
Myles
1:48
the man is very old and the girl is very young
Mrs Hamlin
1:52
Can you use the past tense?
Archie
1:49
Joseph I like your sentence
lexie
1:49
Thats a good sentence Myles
Grace j
1:49
The glass table reflected the suns glowly smile and gave the room a unexpected feeling.
Thomas
1:49
good sentence joe
Neena
1:49
Lily I like  your sentece it is really good
lexie
1:49
Grace j i really like youre sentence.
Mrs Hamlin
1:50
Can you explain what you like about each others' work?
Joseph
1:50
The little girl was astonished at how much amazing orniments there was!
Mrs Hamlin
1:50
The little girl was astonished at how many amazing ornaments there were!
Archie
1:51
louie i like the way you described the Queen
Grace j
1:51
Thanks lexie!!
Harry
1:51
Hi it’s me Harry I think the little girl is going to see what is in the draw and then the old man says HEY what do you think your doing you naughty naughty girls there is some secrets in the whith me and my family
Mrs Hamlin
1:55
Full stops please!
Neena
1:51
The room was filled with smiles
Anthony
1:51
Good sentence joe good
lexie
1:51
The old rustic chair rocked forward and backwards.
Mrs Hamlin
1:55
Can you think of a new describing word instead of rustic?
Kyle
1:51
Tom I realy like yours.But you can improve by puting full stops.Are you geting more ideas from evre one in this chat?
Myles
1:51
she is about to pick a book
Grace j
1:51
i meant your sentence
Harry
1:52
Good sentence joe
Katie
1:52
"Every book, clock, light, stool, case and box tells a great story . Years of mine and all my familys life from my great great great great great grandma to my little grandchildren now."
Lee
1:52
The light has something like a crown on it
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