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AvatarDavid Mitchell
9:13
Good morning Bloggers. Please take a moment to read this:
The Mirror
I looked in the mirror of hope
And saw a crowded theatre.
I looked in the mirror of despair
And saw a library in flames.
I looked in the mirror of knowing
And saw a library of word-thoughts.
I looked in the mirror of daytime
And saw an endless cloud-lake.
I looked in the mirror of winter
And saw frost-feathers fall.
I looked in the mirror of forests
And saw a sly chicken-cruncher pass by.
I looked in the mirror of storms
And saw cloud-tears and electric-spears.
I looked in the mirror of clothes
And saw a shoe-snake tied in knots.
I looked in the mirror of anger
And heard a voice-fist stake its claim.
9:14
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10:35
Please submit each section (2 lines) rather than a whole poem.
Bethany (10)
10:36
I looked in the mirror of delight and saw a sugar-white beach
Isla
10:36
I looked in the mirror of feelings
Amelia R
10:36
I looked in the mirror of flowers
Sachi
10:36
I looked in the mirror of dreams 
And saw a small dream flying.
I looked in the mirror of nightmares
And heard a screaming child.
I looked in the mirror of love 
And saw caring parents.
I looked into the mirror of words
And saw tongue strangling, mouth watering, eye splitting phrases.
I looked into the mirror of thunder
And saw lightning lashing the sea.
I looked into the mirror of sadness
And saw clouds being wrung out upon innocent humans.
I looked into the mirror
And I saw me...
Thomas G SK
10:36
I looked in the mirror of hope, and saw my friends playing tig.
Gennie
10:36
I looked in the mirror mountains,
Eloise
10:36
I looked in the mirror of hope.
India (Pensby Primary)
10:36
I looked in the mirror of hope and saw my future that I await.
Jo Pearce
10:36
I looked in the mirror of hope and saw children.
Nicholas Sing'ombe Warren Road
10:36
I looked in the mirror of disasters and saw a tornado crushing homes.
Chloe- SWW
10:36
I looked at the mirror of winter and I saw delicate snowflakes fluttering down.
Abi
10:36
I looked in the mirror of knowledge
Ella
10:36
I looked in the mirror of spring and saw thousands of daffodils growing.
George (11) Stockland Primary
10:36
I looked into the mirror of north and saw a hunting stone dragon, never to rise.
Olly (10)
10:36
I looked into the mirror of despair
And saw the aftermath of a nuclear disaster.
Seb F
10:37
I looked in the mirror of hope and saw jak,
Sachin
10:37
I looked in the mirror of wind and I saw birds flying not with their feathers but by the breeze.
Bethany (10)
10:37
I looked in the mirror of rhythm and began to tap my toes.
Emily, Manor field
10:37
I looked in the mirror of vampires
Gennie
10:37
And saw a pack of wolves run through the trees
James R
10:37
In the mirror of horrors and saw a snake climbing up a rope coming at me.
Ollie north borough juniors
10:37
I looked in the mirror of shock
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:37
Adults, if you want to comment on some of the children's writing please do. Just add their name and write something positive and a suggestion.
Amelia R
10:37
I looked in the mirror of flowers and saw children running through fields of poppies
Jessica
10:37
I looked in the mirror of the past, and saw the clear water, against the fresh air,
Guest
10:37
I looked in a mirror of coughs
Beabop
10:37
I looked in the mirror of hope and saw mummy's cuddles.
Arthur SWW
10:38
I looked in the mirror storms,
Harry - SWW.
10:38
I looked in the mirror of winter.
Bethany (10)
10:38
I looked into the mirror of mystery and saw a thick blanket of fog.
Edith
10:38
I looked in a Mirror of story's and saw a clouds tears and giants booming.
Devon
10:38
I looked into the mirror of horror and saw a bloodstained painting.
Emma B
10:38
I looked in the mirror of sadness and saw an empty village.
Isla
10:38
I looked in the mirror feelings, and saw a crowd of different expression.
Fran
10:38
I looked in the mirror of light and saw sun-beams smile.
Eloise
10:38
I looked in the hope and saw a field of dogs
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