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Kitty Wilkinson Biography
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Miss Williams
11:36
Good morning everyone, I would like you to help me write a biography of Kitty WIlkinson.
Can you think of an effective opening sentence?
11:40
Jaden and Erdis
11:51
Kitty Wilkinson was the st of the slums which made her unique.
Ada + Ayngel
11:51
Kitty Wilkinson or often referred as ‘Saint of the slums’ did lots for the community of Liverpool.
Miss Williams
11:51
Well Done Jaden and Erdis. I love the relative clause in your sentence. What piece of punctuation do you need to add?
11:52
Ada and Ayngel, could you punctuate the clause in your sentence, please.
Aaliyah and Zefali
11:52
Kitty Wilkinson  was very inspirational to a lot of people
Kelyce+jack
11:53
When kitty was 11years old she worked in a cotton mill
Carl and lea
11:53
Kitty Wilkinson know as “saint of the slums” also she is the only one with a boiler in liverpool
Brooke and Ella
11:53
Kitty Wilkinson was a young girl who had siblings-one brother one sister- and a mom and a dad. Sadly, her baby sister and her dided died while migrating to Liverpool.
Kelyce+jack
11:53
When kitty was 11 years old she worked in the cotton mill
Alfie and Barsam
11:53
Kitty Wilkinson is the only female in St George’s hall
Jaden and Erdis
11:54
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Zona
11:54
Kitty Wilkinson was a Hero in Liverpool. A cholera Epidemic spread across liverpool, she was the only one with a mangle (an olden day boiler) so she let very poor people in her house to wash their rags and also taught them how to use chlorine and lime to wash.
Ada + Ayngel
11:54
We need help to do that
David
11:54
Kitty Wilkinson was kind to everyone and any one.
Miss Williams
11:56
David, great sentence. Could you give me a more powerful adjective to describe Kitty?
Carl and Lea, could you have a look at the tense of some of the words in your sentence please.
11:57
Kelyce and Jack, check your capital letters and full stops please.
Faris and Arthur
11:57
Kitty Wilkinson is one of the most inspireing people in the world
David
11:57
Kitty Wilkinson was a really great person .
Alfie and Barsam
11:57
Kitty Wilkinson was the only female in St George’s hall
Jaden and Erdis
11:57
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Homa and max
11:57
Kitty Wilkinson mostly known as + of the slums-
Brooke and Ella
11:57
Kitty Wilkinson -who did many amazing things - was hardly known for she set her heart out to help people not to get fame.
Aaliyah and Zefali
11:57
Kitty Wilkinson (who was known as the saint of the slums) was known as the first person to have a wash house in Liverpool.
Ellie and Liley and haneen
11:59
part two during the chlorine epidemic
Jaden and Erdis
11:59
Whilst the epidemic broke out, kitty knew she had to something
Tara+Chris +Tom
12:00
Kitty Wilkinson was an inspiration to all rebellious, adventurous women, her spirit still bright as a flickering flame to this day.
David
12:00
Kitty Wilkinson-who was a hero to Liverpool-worked in a horrible place (Cotton Mills) for a lot of years.
Faris and Arthur
12:00
Kitty Wilkinson migrated to Liverpool from ireland
Aaliyah and Zefali
12:01
Ellie and liley, amazing ,but you need to add some puntuation
Miss Williams
12:01
After the opening sentence, write a paragraph which informs people about what the city of Liverpool has to celebrate Kitty Wilkinson's achievements.
Kelyce+jack
12:01
Kitty’s statue was in st George’s hall
Alfie and Barsam
12:02
Kitty Wilkinson had defended many lives - from the cholera epidemic.
David
12:02
Kitty Wilkinson was a very generous person.
Kelyce+jack
12:02
When kitty Wilkinson was 9 she lost her dad and sister
Alfie and Barsam
12:03
Kitty Wilkinson’s family had financial difficulties but thanks to Catherine,they faced that challenge
Ada + Ayngel
12:03
Kitty Wilkinson (or often referred as ‘saint of the slums) did lots for the community of Liverpool.
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When kitty Wilkinson was 9 she lost her dad and sister
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