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Live Writing Session 1 ~ Macbeth
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Lucy
11:27
The ancient castle, stood upon the lush, green hill while the orange sun set gently behind it.
Nicola Goulbourne
11:27
The best sentences have use of high-level vocabulary. Try to build on what you have already done and write another sentence which describes the castle.
Mollie
11:28
The beautiful castle stood on rocks ,in the misty weather
Izzy
11:28
The sky is cloudy and the mist makes it almost impossible to see through
Callum
11:28
It has lots of rocks surrounding it like its their mother
Rubie
11:28
The beautiful,blue sky stands above the ancient castle.
Amelia
11:28
The castle was set on the rocks the mist covered the castle like a trenchrous blanket . the castle was colossal it as if it was a skyscraper .
Harry B
11:28
The castle is dull and misty
Charlie
11:28
The castle stood on top of a hill in a quiet peaceful place.
Kaitlin
11:29
The huge ,dull misty castle stood out on the mountions .
Ellie Deegan
11:29
The castle is stood on the top of a rocky mountan in  the misty weather .
Nicola Goulbourne
11:30
Write a sentence which contains a relative clause. Use the picture and story as inspiration.
William
11:30
Out of the mist stood the colossal castle on the muddy ground
Caiden
11:30
High on a hill, in the middle of the misty valley stood a huge, grand castle. On top of the tall turrets, flags flew in honour of the King.
Logan C
11:30
The magnificent Castle that Lady Macbeth owened is dull,dusty and that sits on the rocks
James
11:30
The massive castle stood behind a sheet  of mist.
Evan
11:30
The misty and cloudy castle stood upon the eerie and colossal mountains above
Alfie m
11:30
The castle stood on a rocky hill, with wind blowing the miserable leaves at the castle.
carter
11:30
The castle is a tall and dark place sitting on a bunch of rocks
Jack A
11:31
The giant misty castle was like a cloud it was that high while the sun slowly sets behind the castle
Mollie
11:31
The beautiful castle stood on rocks,in the misty weather. The bushes swayed through the dull wind without a sound.
Evie Dillon
11:31
The beautiful, humongous castle ,that had been there for a long time, stood on the sharp edge of the cliff top
HarryS
11:31
The castle  stood on a rocky mountain covered in a eerie misty blanket.
Lola
11:31
The dull castle stood tall on the rocky hill while fog and mist gathered around it.
Alfie R
11:31
The brilliant castle stud dodging the thunder and lightning.
Lucas
11:31
Near the forest is where the grand castle stood. Among the giant mountains in the far north of Scotland. The rocky side of hills scratched the rough castle.
Lilija
11:32
The colossal castle perched amid the rocky ground. It was covered in an eerie mist like a treacherous blanket.
Alfie m
11:33
The dinner table had a whole row of delicious food,which had a perfectly cooked chicken.
Lucy
11:33
The wooden table- which was hidden wish plates of food- waited for her guests.
Amelia
11:33
The  sun was reflecting on the colossal castle. The azure sky was stunning.
Callum
11:33
The beautifully laid out table (that everybody would eat on ) had a variety of different foods.
Evan
11:34
In the middle of the magnificent castle the guests arrived in the wonderful, huge dinning hall that was filled of lovely food and full of chairs.
Logan C
11:34
The dinner table,that had rows of delicious foods on,had chicken and chips
Nicola Goulbourne
11:35
What happened to Banquo?
William
11:35
The beautifully table (That everyone would eat) stood out with the amazing food what everybody would eat.
Izzy
11:35
The delicious food, which seemed like it was never ending, was set out beautifully on the table
Lilija
11:35
The castles dining room, that was hungry for inmates, lay silent
Mollie
11:35
The special meal ,for the win of the battle, had delicious food which everybody loved!
Nicola Goulbourne
11:36
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The candles ,which shone like a star in the night sky,was starting to melt slowly.
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