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Miss Williams
10:08
Owen and Zona; check your punctuation please
David could you punctuate your direct speech please
Jaden , Jack and zefali
10:08
Their city
10:09
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David try rabie again
Max and liley
10:09
Jessie’s ruby red lips sparkle in the sun
Ella
10:09
Jessie’s chestnut brown hair cascaded down her pale face
FARIS!
10:09
Jessie’s heart was broken when she found out shocking news that she had to leave her grandmother and go to America.
Jaden , Jack and zefali
10:09
Owen and zona, use a full stop
Tara and Nathan
10:10
David, make sure it makes sense.
Homa
10:10
Jesse is a sweet girl who has golden locks which cascades down her neck.
Ayngel & Barsam
10:10
Jessie is a  sensitive, young girl who is dependent on her grandma.
Homa
10:12
Jesse is a young loyal girl who has turned into a emotional mess when she got told she had to leave her beloved Grandmother to go America.
Tara and Nathan
10:12
Full stops, Max and Linley.
Heidi
10:12
Jessie was a solitary and worried about migrating  to America she doesn’t know what  happen
Ayngel & Barsam
10:12
Jessie is a pretty girl, who respects the rabbi and accepts to go to America.
Owen and zona
10:13
Her emerald green eyes shimmerd in the amber sunset.
Kelyce+Carl
10:13
Jessie is a young little girl with hazel brown eyes and chocolate brown hair that cascade down her shoulders.
Homa and Marquez
10:13
Jesse who has glistening diamond eyes which shine brightly in the amber sunset.
Jaden , Jack and zefali
10:13
Heidi, a solitary what
Christopher+Ada
10:16
Jessie (a bright young girl who can read and write) lives in a cottage were she sells lace to make money.
Tara and Nathan
10:19
Jessie (who was a shy, sweet child) was terrified but excited at the prospect of travelling to America, for she was nervous that she would get lost, worried that her grandmother would cat
Alfie & Haneen
10:19
Jessie has brown chocolate hair whitch hangs down hair peachy neck.
Thomas +erdis
10:19
Jessie asked the Rabbi who would go whith her?
FARIS & SANDRA!
10:21
Jessie has silky blonde hair that cascades down her back.
Ayngel & Barsam
10:21
Jesse (who is a sensitive) is dependent on her grandmother.
Lea +Aaliyah +Ella
10:25
Jessie ( a bright young girl ) lived in a shabby old cottage with her dear old grandmother
Jessie’s pale face gazed longingly out to the sky for she was worried about her grandmother.
Max and liley
10:25
Jessie didn’t want to leave her grandma alone with no one.
Tara and Nathan
10:25
Correct spelling and adjectives Erdis and Thomas.
David
10:25
Jessie was sacred to go to America
FARIS & SANDRA!
10:26
Jessie was wearing the same thing earlier when the rabbi came , a long silky dress, a green scarf and a brown jacket.
Christopher+Ada
10:26
Jessie's face went blank when she heard the petrifying news of sailing to America
Thomas +erdis
10:28
Jessie’s face turd into a smile to a frown when she heard the news.
Ayngel & Barsam
10:29
"Welcome rabbi,what brings you here?"
Tara and Nathan
10:31
Descending from the dark, inky sky, a ball of fiery, flickering light sank into the illuminated, sparkling horizon that glistened golden from the brightness.
Heidi
10:31
Jessie was a heartbroken young lady who had to travel alone. She autumn, flowing hair that cascaded though the thick, green shoal that she wears on her head. Jessie’s face was depressed when she heard the upsetting news that she had to go to America soon. As she gazed across the shimmering sea, she felt alone.
FARIS & SANDRA!
10:31
Jessies heart broke when she heard the shocking news from the rabbi,for she loved her grandmother dearly.Further more she couldn’t leave her grandmother alone.
Thomas +erdis
10:32
Jessie had brown hazel hair and blue eyes,  with a green hood to to stop the the water from getting her wet.
*** Thursday, April 4 ***
Miss Williams
8:44
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