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Live Writing Session - Setting Description
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Miss Williams
8:59
Image 1-
9:03
The sun was setting. It shone down on the water like a beacon. It looked like a blazing ball of fire in the sky.
Jaden and zefali
11:26
The poppy red ball of fire blazed down on the turquoise silk balanket that splashed relentlessly in the misty depths of the afternoon.
Miss Williams
11:26
Jaden and Zefali, could you punctuate your relative clause please
Tara and Nathan
11:29
To improve these mundane, short sentences, you could include additional vocabulary, parenthesis, relative clauses, fronted adverbial (for time, place and manner.
liley and max
11:29
The blazing ball of fire,majestically sunk into the sheet of aqua blue.
Alfie+Haneen
11:29
The sun melted into the sea like if a thousand fire flies just disappeard
ADA+JACK
11:32
As the golden, serene was setting, its radiant light shimmered on the everlasting blanket of blue silk like beacon. The ball of golden fire stained the violet sky.
FARIS & SANDRA!
11:32
As dawn set,the glittery amber sun sank into the the silk blanket of blue
11:35
The blazing glittery amber fireball sank into the silky blanket,majestically.
Thomas +erdis
11:35
As the Amber sun set ,the sun shone through the water like a beacon . It looked like a  huge blazing fire ball in the sky. It looked like a thosond fire
Ayngel & Barsam
11:35
The golden sun (which emerged from the serene sky) sank and stained the sea of magma.
Jaden and Zefali
11:35
The poppy red ball of fire, blazed down on the turquoise silk blanket (that splashed relentlessly) in the misty depths of the afternoon.
Christopher and Brooke
11:35
The waves-which swifted along the horizon-were dancing majestically apon the aqua blue sea.
Ella & Lea & Owen
11:35
Above the aqua blue sheet , a ball of scarlet red fire shone everlastingly across the violet sky.As the waves danced melodically the evening became dusk.
liley and max
11:36
As the glazing sun set, a heat that was mygesticly shimmering ( over the deep blue aqua ocoen gracefully).
Jaden and Zefali
11:36
Whilst the blazing ball of fire hid behind the clouds, it lit the air up like a thousand sparklers on a festival
Thomas +erdis
11:36
As the Amber sun set , the sun shone through the water like a beacon. It looked like a thousand fire crackers in the sky. The water was like a blood sea
Alfie+Haneen
11:36
As the golden seren sun (which gracefully lowered its self into the aqua-blue sea) melted its self like a thousand fire flies on festival night
David & Heidi.
11:38
Underneath the fiery- red mist, the flaming ball of fire slowly descended down into the depths of the vivid sea, the serene, amber sun melted into the sea like a thousand sparkles blazing on a summers night.
Ella & Lea & Owen
11:38
Across the amber horizon, amulti coloured sky
Miss Williams
11:39
Image 2 - The blue sky was filled with clouds. The clouds were white and fluffy. The rest of the sky turned purple.
FARIS & SANDRA!
11:40
The foamy white cloud flew on top of the horizon.
Jaden and Zefali
11:40
The golden,serene sun relaxed into the ruby-red sky.
liley and max
11:40
Below the shimmering quilt of violet the aqua blue waves danced with great ,synchronicity.
Thomas +erdis
11:40
The golden sky looked like a thousand gold bars , as the wind sings and the ocean dances .
Christopher and Brooke
11:40
The colours of the sky blended above the ocean breeze whilst the blazing ball of fire shimmered brightly.
Tara and Nathan
11:40
Elegantly, the majestic, dazzling fireball - which was like a block of melted butter dissolving into hot water- sank into the rocky, everlasting horizon.
Ayngel & Barsam
11:41
Beneath the violet quilt,orange and yellow struck across the sky
Alfie+Haneen
11:41
As The multicoloured sky flew by the plane fields of grass it was like a summer afternoon
Christopher and Brooke
11:42
Underneath the depths of a marine, blue sea the sun slowly descended down into the reflection of the sea, the waves danced along the horizon as the wind swings and the colour bonds beneath the golden glow.
Homa & Marquez
11:42
Clouds full of colours exploded on the canvas, (Which cascaded down and landed in the sea of paint).
Tara and Nathan
11:42
A stretch of everlasting canvass, the sky was etched with rose - hewed streaks and splashes of colour as perfect as the ripe skin of a juicy peach, illuminating the rippling, dancing sea below.
Kelyce+Carl
11:43
The blue shimmering sky was filled white fluffy clouds. The clouds were as fluffy as cotton. The rest of the sky turned violet.
Jaden and Zefali!
11:43
A rainbow of colour splashed onto the sky, whilst the ocean showed a reflection.
Ella & Lea & Owen
11:43
across the amber horizon,a multi coloured sky lit up around the illuminating city of New York.The clouds decended from heaven and above.
Arthur&ellie
11:44
The beautiful  scarlett sky was filled with cotton clouds as the ocean sways medically.
Ayngel & Barsam
11:45
The water slowly drifted across the horizon -while the sun was peaking through the foamy clouds-like an eagle swooping down for its prey.
liley and max
11:45
The scorching hot sun stained  the Shapire quilt sky as the wind whispers and the ocean sways forth and back
FARIS & SANDRA!
11:45
As dawn set, the blazing sun ,that was nearly up for ever, filled with clouds ,danced under the water.
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