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Christopher and Brooke
11:46
Across the violet ocean the Scarlett sky flooded the air like a tsunami.
Ayngel & Barsam
11:46
Ella Lea and Owen you forgot a capital letter at the start of your sentence.
Jaden and Zefali!
11:46
The red ball of fire danced around the sky forming (a rainbow of beauty) above the turquoise silk blanket in the early depths of the afternoon
liley and max
11:46
Back and forth...
Thomas +erdis
11:46
As the serene sun passed by, the sky hid in the depths of the clouds. Beneath the golden glow, the Amber sunset blazes like a thousand stars.
Aaliyah+ tegan
11:47
The sun set magesticly,the sky turned into a jet black ocean full of rich purple streaks with soft golden stars scattered all around
David & Heidi.
11:47
As dusk closed in, the aqua, blue sky was filled with fluffy, white blankets that covered the rest of the violet air as gracefully, the thick blue depths of the sea was reflecting off the misty sky.
Alfie+Haneen
11:47
Above the aqua blue sea, lays an elagent maroon and pink dotted sky
Christopher and Brooke
11:48
As dawn fell,the serine sun melted below the depths of the clouds underneath the golden glow.
Ayngel & Barsam
11:48
Lovely sentence David and Heidi
Homa & Marquez
11:48
Streaks of colours looked as soft as the supple skin of perfect ripened peach. It looked like an explosion of paint (which was exploded in a everlasting canvas) emerged gracefully.
ADA+JACK
11:49
The sapphire silky blanket was gently stained with streaks of soft chalky white. They gracefully danced in the sky ,which was a coloured a phosphorescent lilac.
Arthur&ellie
11:49
The water slowly drifted across the horizon-while the sun was beautifully peaking through the fluffy clouds-like an bird shifting down for its prey.
Miss Williams
11:49
Image 3 - Beneath the sky, the waves went against the shore. The waves swayed together.
liley annd max
11:50
The Amber sunset glazed over the deep blue aqua ocoen(Wich was swaying into the marine ship.
Thomas +erdis
11:50
As day turned to night,looked like a blood moon.
David & Heidi.
11:50
Arthur and Ellie could you put a fronted adverbial to make the sentence more interesting
Thomas +erdis
11:51
Above the aqua- blue sheet, the wind sings and the waves dance.
Ayngel & Barsam
11:52
David and Heidi we like your powerful adjectives,and we could not find any improvements to be made.
David & Heidi.
11:53
Thomas and erdis that was a good sentence but could you make it longer
Homa & Marquez
11:54
As the blazing fire ball emerged gracefully behind the amber sunset, the waves crashed above the aqua-blue sheet. The summers breeze pushed the waves with amaculate synchronicity.
Thomas +erdis
11:54
The blue waves rushed towards the shore like a bullit.
Ella&lea&Owen
11:54
The waves which danced with immaculate synchronicity bursted with joy as the serene sun melted into the depths off the aquatic kingdom
Tara and Nathan
11:55
Melodically, the ocean swayed and bobbed along to the beat of a gentle breeze, caressing the waves with loving, stroking fingers. Every now and again, a strong gale whipped at the innocent ripples and chalky, white foam that broke the surface of the everlasting, restless smooth silk sheet, crashing ferociously onto the grains of sand that were the shore.
Christopher and Brooke
11:55
Beneath the blazing sky,the waves we against the shore relentlessly.The waves swayed together like an army about to battle.
David & Heidi.
11:55
Gracefully, the thick, aqua waves danced underneath the jet, orange blazing ball of fire.
Aaliyah+ tegan
11:55
The sun shone like a dream and all was calm and the waves started to dance happily
ADA+JACK
11:56
The blanket of the golden suns light covered the indigo sea (which danced synchronised to the birds gentle lullaby).
liy annd max
11:56
Beneath the amber sunset the deep blue sea was dancing  and the waves were swishing and swashing
FARIS & SANDRA!
11:56
The crimson red sun,shon brightly on the diomand blue silky blanket.
Alfie+Haneen
11:56
Beneath the milky twilight the waves crashed forcing the rocks to move out the way
David & Heidi.
11:57
Lily and max remember to put in commas, dashes or brackets.
Jaden and Zefali!
11:57
The golden,elegant sun created a everlasting blanket, as the waves splashed and danced melodically.
11:58
As the elegant, blazing sun shone across the the turquoise blue blanket, it devised a spotlight of gold to th
FARIS & SANDRA!
11:58
Under the heavens , the terrifying waves crashed against  the shaking shore .
Thomas +erdis
11:58
As day turned to night,the waves ,which danced everywhere,got darker and darker.
Ayngel & Barsam
12:01
Homa and Marquez we love your fronted adverbial and what to improve is instead of pushed use forced but other than that it’s amazing.
Ella&lea&Owen
12:02
As day drew to a close,the waves swayed everlastingly as the vibrant orange blazing ball of fire looks down on them.
Thomas +erdis
12:03
The dark waves came across the shore with relentless force.
Kelyce+Carl
12:03
The aqua blue waves swaying playfully through the golden serene sun.
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