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Mr Joel
2:30
Do you think the crystals help with this?
Abraham
2:31
The crystals probably give him supernatural power
Mr Joel
2:31
What can he look at with the help of these rock/crystals?
Mr Joel
2:31
Sorry - What can he tell?
Mr Joel
2:33
What do the rocks/crystals help him with?
Abraham
2:33
What can he tell?
2:35
Sir are you there?
Mr Joel
2:35
Yes
Mr Joel
2:35
Write a short story about this man. You can
2:36
What supernatural powers does he have?
Abraham
2:36
I don’t understand the question
Oh ok
Mr Joel
2:37
You can use the information we have talked about and post it to Seesaw if you wish.
Abraham
2:38
This man is a mad scientist who wants to rule the world but one of his inventions go wrong and takes off his arm.Then after robot surgery he finds out that the monster that took of his hand had escaped and is making more monsters
Mr Joel
2:39
This isn't a story.
Abraham
2:39
Like a back story
Mr Joel
2:39
Yes it is more of a synopsis
Mr Joel
2:41
This is the Jar Wizard. Maybe you could include him in your story. How are the characters linked. What's similar? What's different? Do these men get along?
Abraham
2:44
Once upon a time, there was mad scientist. He made monsters and planned to use them to rule the world but one day when he made his mightiest beast yet his arch nemesis the jar wizard came and set free his monsters. while trying to escape he lost an arm. After getting robot surgery he made an oath to get the jar wizard. TO BE CONTINUED......
Mr Joel
2:45
A great start. No need for the 'to be continued...'
Abraham
2:45
Is this a story or still a synopsis?
Mr Joel
2:45
Yes it's a story.
Abraham
2:46
Thank goodness
Mr Joel
2:48
Home(home)work  - Could you expand on these ideas to write a short story. About 500 words if you wanted a limit. Think about your sentence openers, paragraphs, and a clear structure beginning, middle end.
Abraham
2:48
Should I do it on seesaw?
Mr Joel
2:49
I'm going to go now. Yes please - add it to Seesaw.
Thanks for joining me on this beautiful Monday afternoon and we will speak soon.
Abraham
2:49
Ehn is the next lesson?
When?
Mr Joel
2:50
We can do another one on Wednesday.
I'll post the links to the class page and Seesaw.
Abraham
2:50
What time?
Mr Joel
2:50
What time is best for you?
Abraham
2:51
2 o’clock like before would be fine
Mr Joel
2:51
Perfect
Take care and keep working hard.
Abraham
2:51
Bye sir
Byeeee
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