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Monday Jotcast 6/4/2020
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Mr Joel
2:57
Good afternoon.
Ellice
3:00
Hi
Olivia
3:00
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Mr Joel
3:00
How are you both?
Ellice
3:01
BORED
Mr Joel
3:01
Hopefully a bit of Monday afternoon writing will help relieve some boredom.
Olivia
3:01
Great thank you.
How are you Mr.Joel?
Mr Joel
3:02
I'm also great Olivia.
Mr Joel
3:02
Thank you for asking.
Olivia
3:02
Thats good!
Ellice
3:03
So what are we doing
Mr Joel
3:03
Don't you mean, Mr Joel, what fabulous writing are we doing today?
Olivia
3:03
Sir is anybody else in this chat?
Haha
Mr Joel
3:04
Not yet Olivia. The may join as we are going along. Or they may be outside (in their garden) enjoying some sunshine.
Ellice
3:04
WHATEVER đŸ˜’
Mr Joel
3:04
Haha
So Ellice and Olivia. I want you to set the scene. Imagine a cool, calm ocean. A man drifts
lazily in a canoe, unaware that beneath him a shark is
homing in on the unsuspecting victim.
Olivia
3:05
Are you not excited Ellice? :D
Ellice
3:05
Kinda
Olivia
3:05
Ok haaha
Ellice
3:05
:/
Mr Joel
3:06
Imagine a cool, calm ocean. A man drifts lazily in a canoe, unaware that beneath him a shark is homing in on the unsuspecting victim.
Have you done this?
3:07
Picture it in your head
Is this the image you both had?
Olivia
3:08
Yes Mr.Joel
As the tranquil ocean water drifted a little closer away, the canoe calmly swayed.
Ellice
3:08
No
Mr Joel
3:08
You should be able to click on the image to look at it more closely.
Ellice
3:09
I imagined that he was in the middle of the ocean and sharks were s
Mr Joel
3:10
Ok - well he isn't being surrounded but I like that idea. Think about…
• From whose perspective will you begin your story: the hunter or the hunted? Why?
Olivia
3:10
The ocean looks so beautiful! I'd love to swim in that
Mr Joel
3:11
What is the hunter?
Olivia
3:11
Maybe the hunter because the hunted doesn't know about this shark yet.
The shark.
Ellice
3:11
Shark
Can i be the hunter
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