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ethanc & billy
11:06
bye
tyler and billy joe
11:05
I think in the hut next to the lake there could be spider webs and the smell of different animals.
faith
11:05
It actually want to be there.
AH AND KC
11:05
we think there might be a story behind all of this #
Evie and Mia
11:05
a dark and lonely place on the cliffs
jac and gabe
11:05
What a scary picture
HK and JL
11:04
I don't like what I see and both of the pictures
Daisy
11:04
The water splashes against the rocks
ethanc & billy
11:04
mikolaj and Cameron great description but remember your punctuation
Isac and Ryley
11:03
Daisy you have got a spelling mistake you have put cwhere instead of where.
faith
11:03
I think this is a strange and mystical land. Which has a great and enchanting story behind it.
Brody and Ethan R
11:03
I think the houses life has been ruined
AH AND KC
11:03
we think someone might be hidden in the wooden house sinkning into the water
lydia and ella
11:03
It looks like a Ice castle and it looks very cold and Icy and very slippery.
Brody and Ethan R
11:03
I think it is placed in the hilltops
Miss Williams
11:02
Mikolaj and Cameron would we say 'got' built?
Mikolaj Cameron
11:02
In the mossy mountains a flooded mossy house got built but first there was a big or even massive tornado .On the side of the mountain thats why they look like mossy troll teeth .
Isac and Ryley
11:02
HK and JL. Me and Isac really like your comments. Carry on the good work.
HK and JL
11:02
Neather would I gabe
Daisy
11:01
A place where nobody lives
tyler an billy joe
11:01
If this is a real place I would love to go. There are probably ghost there. That river is probably full of silhouettes. It looks like it has been there for years. If I wanted to hide ill hide there.
HK and JL
11:01
The stones underneath maybe the home to a dragon den buried in the rocks.
Brody and Ethan R
11:01
I think there is a lot of soaked plank's.
jac and gabe
11:01
That looks scary
Daisy
11:01
A quiet place, A place where the waves have splashed the den. Now all that's left is a soggy place that is deserted
ethanc & billy
11:01
the hut has  wet soggy  wooden walls.
AH AND KC
11:01
moldy moss spreading across to the hill
Shannon and Vlera
11:01
Caleb and Kloe we think you need a capital letter for 'We' .
Evie and Mia
11:01
a spooky  gloomy house in the middle of the mountaintops
jac and gabe
11:01
I wouldnt want to go  there
Isac and Ryley
11:00
We have crown status, we can also give feedback to others.
HK and JL
11:00
There might be something in side the cabin. Maybe there's a demon hiding in a hole underneath.
jac and gabe
11:00
An abandoned castle that is now infested with a kinds of petrifided
AH AND KC
11:00
a smokey reflection of a black and white pattern miss Williams
Isac and Ryley
10:59
The large cliffs look like they are closing their lips.
ethanc & billy
10:59
On the rocky mountain there is algae that wraps around your legs when you swim water
Brody and Ethan R
10:59
I think there would be animals and some wet things in there.
Shannon and Vlera
10:58
Nice adjectives but I think you need 'an' not 'a' as 'a' is a vowel (Abandoned) .
Miss Williams
10:58
Caleb and Kloe, great use of personification
caleb and kloe
10:58
we can hear the gloomy wind whispering . we think it is spooky because there is shaded trees in the back ground
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