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Daisy
10:58
A quiet place , a place cwhere the waves have splashed and soked the den
AH AND KC
10:58
i could see the wooden house rotting until another one risen
reecer
10:58
i can see a gate kasul
Evie and Mia
10:58
thank you miss
HK and JL
10:58
The cabin in the lake may be damp and the old  oners left it to rot away
Brody and Ethan R
10:58
The hut was put in a disaster and got toured apart
Isac and Ryley
10:57
This one looks like an abandoned witch's hut in the middle of two large cliffs.
Miss Williams
10:57
Brilliant Lydia and Ella, what will they find in the hidden kingdom?
lydia and ella
10:57
A hidden kingdom waiting to be discovered
Miss Williams
10:57
AH and KC what is hidden within the hills?
AH AND KC
10:57
I can see the hills reflection gleaming of the water.
Miss Williams
10:57
Brendan what do you think will be in the hut?
brend
10:57
I can see a abandoned hut
Shannon and Vlera
10:57
Misty lakes steam through moldy hills.
jac and gabe
10:56
I would say this is an abandoned church
Brody and Ethan R
10:56
I can see that it is winter and the island is the only thing left.
Miss Williams
10:56
Evie and Mia great use of alliteration
Evie an Mia
10:56
An abandoned gloomy cabin in the middle of a slimy swamp.
ethanc & billy
10:56
I think the ivy's fingers fingers wove around the house
Miss Williams
10:56
Fantastic HK and JL
HK and JL
10:56
I can hear the wind roaring against the fog blowing it towards the castle that looks like the Disney land castle
Isac and Ryley
10:56
I can hear the wind whistling against my eardrum.
reecer
10:56
I can see fog sooeaying
tyler an billy joe
10:56
It gives me shiver down my spine.
Shannon and Vlera
10:55
We can hear the drumming wind whistling tunes of wonder.
brend
10:55
the castle looks mysterious
Miss Williams
10:55
Mikolaj and Cameron I love the capital letters for shouting, but what punctuation do you need for someone speaking?
Mikolaj Cameron
10:55
On the other side of the haunted river an abandoned copied Hogwarts shouted "IF YOU PASS YOU SHALL BE MY SLAVE"
Miss Williams
10:55
Brilliant Jac and Gabe!
jac and gabe
10:55
A hidden kingdom waiting to be discovered by adventures .
Isac and Ryley
10:55
I can see a pathway up to the palace on the ghostly looking island
Miss Williams
10:54
Evie an Mia
10:54
an old abandoned Disney castle.
AH AND KC
10:54
We could hear the waves swish along the castle miss Williams
Shannon and Vlera
10:54
Pointy towers stagger beneath the gloomy skies.
Daisy
10:54
I can hear nothing but silence
Miss Williams
10:54
Great use of the word Swished AH and KC
AH AND KC
10:54
The gloomy ocean swished along the castle
Miss Williams
10:54
Great Caleb and Kloe, why do you think it looks spooky?
caleb and kloe
10:53
The castle of gloom because it is very dark  and spooky
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