JotCast | Oak Art Review

Oak Art Review

Freddie

2:48

Because when I read it I thought the same too.

Jaimi Smith

2:48

Connor i've picked you especially because I have a good feeling about you're comments. You're explination about Mona Lisa is outstanding...When i had a read through you're work I felt like you acctually looked through the pixel art and looked at every single feature about it because it sure does sound like it you have got a few things you could tell us more about but other then that i feel very confident about you're work and I can see you've really tried you're hardest and for that i praise you're work with gratitude.

Phoebe

2:47

I really like Jaimi's reply because she used very specific vocabulary and adjectives to describe her own opinion for the pixel artwork.

Demi

2:47

I think Jaimi's review is very detailed and helpful, because she has put in the right amount of criticism and praise in the review.

Amelia G

2:47

Demi has explained how the detail has positive and negative.

Riley

2:47

With the clothes I would make it symetricle because on the left side of the dress it is really low and the one on the right is alot higher then the left side, so I would make it an even size for it. I like Grace commentthe most use full because it always need to be equal.

lacey louise ...

2:45

i really like kyles comment as he has gave a opinion of an idea

Jesse

2:45

i think phoebe's, Kyle's, Shayleighs , Lewis',Amelia's,, Lucas's and Kians are the most helpful reports!

luke

2:45

i really like Grace's because she has done a blot of writing and it is really detailed

Amelia G

2:44

I think Phoebe's review is helpful because it is her own opinion.

Tanweer Dar

2:44

Ellie, how could they have done that just using pixels? Which areas need to be lighter/darker?

ellie

2:43

i think that they could inprove the lighting effects and make the face better

Jaimi Smith

2:43

I personally think the attention throughout the picture is splendid and I can positively day that this piece of art is incredible. The manufacture of the face is really detailed but I feel as if the eyes could do with a different colour to the face because I don't like the eyes that much...

Tanweer Dar

2:42

Freddie, why do you agree with Grace?

Freddie

2:42

Amazing Grace I love your opinion I agree.

Connor

2:42

This peice of pixel art is amazing the colour choices are very good although the background colours don't mach the real Mona Lisa so i'm not to impresed I feel as if the colours could have been good enough. The hair on thhe other hand is to thin if you look at the real Mona Lisa's hair it's thick and this picture has thin hair...On the positive side the face looks bold and he or she had a really good attempt at it and i feel as if they have done an amazing job!!! I find this one the most useful because all of this information is positive.

Kyle

2:39

I think he/she should try to improve the Mona lisa itself by removing the hood from her head. (Sorry if its hair instead of a hood)

lucas

2:39

I like the hair because realistic

Jesse

2:39

Nice sentence Phoebe.

Tanweer Dar

2:39

Have a read through all of the reviews. Which comments do you find the most useful and why?

Amelia G

2:38

I am impressed by the artwork.

Phoebe

2:38

I think the skin tone is a bit pale they should brighten up the skin so it's more noticeable and effective.

Jaimi Smith

2:37

Grace

2:37

In my opinion, the arms are very wobbly. I would change them to make them straighter but stll in the same position. I like the position of the arms because that is the way they have been placed.

Tarley

2:37

the skin tone is too bright compared to Leonardo da vinci's masterpiece

Freddie

2:36

This masterpiece is astonishing I love the background and in my opinion for a pixel art that someone has probably only done once in there life it can go in a museum. It has very vibrant coulors and I love it.

Demi

2:36

I really like the art.

SHAYLEIGH

2:36

This could inspire people to try and do it them selfs

Tanweer Dar

2:36

Khobi, how would you change the face?

Khobi

2:36

The artist could have focused on the face more

Malakie

2:36

it is a very wonderful piece of art for a child.

Tarley

2:35

this master piece is wonderful put the back ground and that realistic in the real picture it's not light and dark make it realistic good job

Tanweer Dar

Lucas, what do you like about the hair?

2:35

Brendan, it is pixel art! Wouldn't you expect pixel art to look that way?

lucas

2:34

i personally like the hair.

Brendan

2:34

I like that they have put alot of time and effort in this picture but it needs more detail in the background because it looks like a corrupted computer screen.

Tanweer Dar

2:32

Amelia, how could the artist have done that differently?

Amelia G

2:32

The pose looks strange like she is dancing.

Phoebe

2:31

I think they put quit a bit of effort into this pixel art I understand how hard it is to draw the Mona Lisa or use pixels for it.

Jesse

2:31

I really Love this pixal art!, I love how one arm is straight and one arm is crossed so it looks like she is a bit shy!!