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Lewis and Tyler
1:58
The flaming house was deadly and possesed with the ansisters was haunting the overgrown house.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:58
Tarley and Luke - Try to write your sentence like is in a story:

The bright moon shone above the flaming wooden house.

Can you have a go?
Tarley and Luke
1:57
The bright moon is shining on the little wooden house thats on fire
Freddie and Connor
1:57
The fiery, blazing house is like taking part of space.
Jasmine & Jami
1:57
As the house was burning to a crisp, we were runing as far away as we could and we had an un-comfortable sensation as we ran on the staw like grass...
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:57
Malakye and Lola - I love that sentence. Could you add a simile to help describe how the house was creaking. You could add some personification!
Lewis and Tyler
1:56
Behind the warm firey house was werewolfs trying to eat the burning,half dead people.
Freddie and Connor
1:56
The fiery, blazing house took part of space
Malakye and Lola
1:56
The deserted house stayed still, creeking away on the mountain in the misty night.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:56
Lucas and Kian - Well done, try not to tell the reader that the house is haunted. Instead, describe it in a way that the reading MIGHT think that it could be haunted. Have a go!
Lucas and Kian
1:55
The haunted house burned in the moonlight.
Freddie and Connor
1:55
The hypnotised trees were like dark, evil demons.
Lucas and Kian
1:55
The dark, shadowy trees swayed in the air.
Freddie and Connor
1:55
The overseered trees were like people cutting them down.
Layla
1:55
The fogy black  trees were coverd in mist .
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1:55
Lewis and Tyler
1:52
The frosty deep,long river was demon looking and the air was cold as ice.
Lucas and Kian
1:52
The snow white mist floated in the air
Brendan and Jesse
1:52
The tall ,black trees look  like a bomb was exploded in the river and splashed up high
Riley and Simon
1:52
The cold icy water ran down the river as the tall trees swayed in the open wind.
Malakye and Lola
1:50
The eerie trees hung over the never ending river which sparkled with calmness.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:49
Lucas and Kian - Can you finish this sentence for me? What was the mist floating above?
Lucas and Kian
1:49
The snow, white mist floated
Jasmine & Jami
1:49
The whistling wind was howling at us as the trees were dancing every way.
Tarley and Luke
1:49
The long misty river  was bright and shiny .
Kyle,Khobi
1:49
The magestic water flowed thorough the pile of of the frozen polar bear like trees.
Freddie and Connor
1:49
Thanks
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:49
Lewis and Tyler - Well done, can you tell me more about the air?
Malakye and Lola
1:48
The silver mist is covering the sky's surface.
Riley and Simon
1:48
The thick, icy cold snow was glimering through out the misty day.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:48
Freddie and Connor - I like how you have described the river as majestic. Now describe the trees for me. Can you think of a simile?
Lewis and Tyler
1:48
The dark green trees, Were misty. The air was freezing and breeze.
Lucas and Kian
1:47
The smooth,shinying water was flowing own the river
Freddie and Connor
1:47
The chilled water flowed down the majestic river.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:47
Demi and Amelia - Well done, I'm liking the word eerie! If you were stood there, how would it make you feel? Tell me.
Demi and Amelia
1:47
The eerie mist reflected of the long winding river.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:47
Malakye and Lola - I love the word glistening! Now tell me about the mist.
Malakye and Lola
1:46
The glistening river looked as though it would never end.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:46
The calm water lapped against the frozen banks.
Freddie and Connor
1:45
Hi everybody.
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Freddie and Connor
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Hi Lewis and Tyler
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Tarley and Luke
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Good afternoon
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Good afternoon
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Brendan and Jesse
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ok
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Kyle,Khobi
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hi
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Kyle,Khobi
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BRuh
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Lewis and Tyler
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And the people in the village was burning because of the red hot lava was pouring on them...
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