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Rio

10:10

The wings look soft and gentle like a butterfly's wings and seems to be paper thin as if you could poke your finger threw it.

Leon

10:10

The creature looks fierce and more colourful than a rainbow. And the overhooked claws look like a pirates hook

Andrea

10:10

The light wings look like a autumn dropped leaf.

David Mitchell

10:11

Great Leonoptryx

Liam

10:11

Its wings as orange as an autumn leaf in the breez

Andrea

10:11

The huge wings are as big as London bridge

Lennon

10:11

The fins are like a shark but if it was a shark it would be disguised because its blue like the ocean.

David Mitchell

10:12

Liam - I like that you have added 'in the breeze' to your sentence. It lures the reader in thinking everything is fine when it might not be.

liam

10:12

Its wings as orange as an autumn leaf in the summer wind in autumn

Callum

10:15

The alpha of this animal species is the Great leonoptryx.

Rio

10:15

It's wings are gentle like a glider and could glide softly like a rainbow appearing from nowhere.

Owen

10:15

This creature could be bigger then a airplane.

Andrea

10:15

the creatures skin is scratch proof

Lennon

10:15

The beak is as long as pinokio's nose.

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Callum

10:16

The animal will need grate skill to tame.

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