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Lucy WRPS
10:27
I really want to find out more about this!
Amelie
10:27
It is a good sentence because it makes me imagine it!
Izzy
10:30
I like how they are  aware that there is a stranger.
Guest
10:30
I like the phrase stick together because it reminds me of teamwork.
Alice Q
10:30
I like how the adverb wearily show us how they are feeling.
Amberlie
10:30
I like how there is suspense.
charlie
10:30
I like the words (stick together) because it tells you that they arn't going to split up.
HOLLY
10:30
it is really good
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:30
Well done Holly - Make sure you tell the author what you liked about it.
Kitty Wright.
10:30
I just feel like authors are just so good at drawing you in which is what this does.
Sam
10:30
I liked the contrast being nice and being a stranger.
Amelie
10:30
I really like it
Guest
10:30
I think that this teaches us not to speek to strangers as nice as they might seem.
Lily SWW
10:31
I love that they realise by sticking together they'll be safe.
Mrs Murrin
10:31
They are weary, but they are still aware of the possible danger. Keeps me interested.
Niamh a
10:31
Where is listeners posts
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:31
In the orange menu at the top of the screen.
Lili
10:31
It makes me want to read more!
Toby
10:31
I really like the word 'wearily because it helps to set a mood for the sentence.
Christie
10:31
Shows great team work
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