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Margaret
10:04
Rapidly,ย ย the blinding sun was fighting it way between the trees, trying to meet the shadows.
Mr Joel
10:04
A fantastic sentence Margaret. What would happen next?
Margaret
10:05
With caution the sun was robins mother guiding him and the outcast trees towards her.
Mr Joel
10:06
Can everybody have a go at improve this sentence.
With caution the sun was robins mother guiding him and the outcast trees towards her.
Seth๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ
10:06
The tree's stood like soldiers in a bunker.
TONYp21
10:07
Long trees peeling out of the ground while the golden sun beamed though the dawn forest
Anexia๐Ÿ˜
10:07
Where am I? All could see is daylight trying to blind my eyes.
norm๐Ÿ˜ƒ
10:08
The trees blocked the amazing sun.
SHAUN :)
10:08
Green trees stood in the ball of sunlight.
Mabior๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž
10:08
My feet sank into the green and fertilized grass.
10:09
With caution, the Sun was Robin's Mother, Guiding Him to the Outcasts' hideout.
Mr Joel
10:09
Well done Mabior.
We can stop this now.
Mabior๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž
10:12
Thank you
TONYp21๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž
10:12
Robin staggerd though the forest while cruching leaves also holding his help less dad
Tillie
10:13
The twisty trees was like bony fingers.
Mr Joel
10:13
Tillie, think about an outcast in this setting.
Sama
10:13
Shaking with terror, Emma moved slowy towards the shortestย ย tree to find a gun with a little note...
Mr Joel
10:14
A lovely fronted adverbial.
What happens next Sama
SHAUN ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿต
10:14
The Outcasts moved slowly step by step climbing trees in case there was any Sheriff's men.
Mr Joel
10:15
Can you add description to this sentence Shaun.
Tillie
10:15
The outcast climed the twisty trees.
Mabior
10:16
Rofus clung onto the Tree that was over-lapping the forest floor
Mr Joel
10:16
A very short sentence Tillie but I like the adjective you have used.
ABHI :)
10:16
My eyes were caught on a vast tree, its branches waving like rapid water in the sunlight.
TONYp21๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž
10:16
Blob hart sank into the relaxation while laying in the green he felt paradise.
Mr Joel
10:16
Think about your punctuation Tony.
Sama
10:17
She got closer and closer and started to read the note.
Jancy๐Ÿ˜Š
10:17
Fairy blue bird climbed the trees carefully because of the Sheriff's mans.
Mr Joel
10:17
Sheriff's men
Sama
10:17
Come to the castle to find you family just remember youe gun
Mr Joel
10:18
How did this make the character feel?
Emilia
10:18
Blood rushing through his vains,small Ben moved slowly through the tall trees.
๐Ÿฆ’kacper๐Ÿฆ’
10:20
the trees long and tall where the out cast or in the trees as theirs is Little sun
Anexia๐Ÿ˜
10:20
Confused and worried,Alexia looked around the forest. Infront of her was a tree with a stabbed sword in it. Alexia felt lost and knew that the sherrif's men would catch her...she could galloping hooves behind her!
Mr Joel
10:21
A lovely short description Anexia. Read your sentence carefully. I can see missing words.
TONYp21๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž
10:21
As blob walked over to the lush green grass while looking at the twisty bright trees.
Mr Joel
10:21
What?
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Majak
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8:52
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Good morning.
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tillie
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8:53
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hi
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tillie
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8:54
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hi
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tillie
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hi
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kacper
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9:02
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A forest with a sunshine green all around.
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tillie123
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9:02
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In the forest the trees waved as the clouds slowley moved by.
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Sama
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9:02
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Smallย ย spaces in the forest was used for the shadows of the long trees.
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Ria
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9:02
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As i looked up into the sky i could see the trees blocking the sunlight.
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Adam:)
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Anjola
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9:08
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Suddenly, i saw a light calling me but where....
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Jancy
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9:09
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With caution, the sun was Robin's mother guiding him and the outcasts towards the trees.
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Margaret
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9:09
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With caution, the sun was Robins mother, guiding him and theย ย outcast like trees towards her.
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SHAUN ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿต
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9:09
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Robin climbed up the tree seeing the valley of Nottingham.
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๐Ÿฆ’kacper๐Ÿฆ’
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9:09
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Light green all around long treesย ย spread out.
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not bobby ๐Ÿฅž
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9:09
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Perking threw the light the humungus,giant trees.
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Tillie
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9:09
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Trees leaves were flowing in the direction of the wind.
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Adam:)
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9:10
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With caution , the sun was Robins mother guiding him to the outcast trees
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Sama
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9:10
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With caution, the was Robins mother guidding him and the outcasts to her house.
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ABHI :)
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9:10
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Trees swayed in a lovely melodious sight,
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ABHI :)
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9:10
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aww it stopped
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๐Ÿฑโ€๐Ÿ‘คMaja๐Ÿฑโ€๐Ÿ‘ค
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9:10
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As Sherwood rose from the night so did the outcast .
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Adam:)
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9:13
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The long tree's stood mountainous , keeping the sun of the dark .
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Jancy๐Ÿ˜Š
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9:13
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Fairy blue bird would jump high by holding the tree and run fast
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SHAUN ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿต
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9:14
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Bob slowly climbed a tree and got his arrow to shoot down any intruders.
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๐Ÿฆ’kacper๐Ÿฆ’
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9:15
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As the out cast hide on the trees as the out cast be there for a long time some times the cave.
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Tillie
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9:15
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The outcasts were stepping on the leaves and left a crunch noise.
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Anjola
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9:15
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As jade walked intoย ย the monster she saw birds tweeting in the skies trees standing their like walls the ground sticking their like slime.
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not bobby ๐Ÿฅž
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9:16
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Long trees standing like statues
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โคRIAโค
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9:16
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Fast as they could, the outcasts ran to hide from the sheriff's men.
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SHAUN ๐Ÿ™ˆ๐Ÿ™Š๐Ÿต
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9:17
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The Outcasts moved cautiously step by step climbing gigantic trees in case there was any Sheriff's men.
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Margaret
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9:17
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Eliza's legs started to shake ,her eyes wanted to send out a river,remember the memorise of her and her Father coming to the same tree.
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Bahaa ๐Ÿ’ฒ๐Ÿ’ฒ
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9:17
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The outcast running away for there lives went behind the tree so the don't get caught.
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not bobby ๐Ÿฅž
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9:18
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The outcast stood by the dark oak tree.
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ABHI :)
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9:18
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My heart was in my throat as I climbed with my nimble feet.
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Sama
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9:19
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Emma felt something was going to be wrong but she still wanted to see her family.
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Adam:)
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Adam:)
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Adam:)
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Tillie
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9:22
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The dark forest was as dark as the black hole so the out cast couldn't fine there way.
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Stacy
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9:23
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Pretrified , Max went slowly through the lushย ย green forest that looked like vains through your skin.
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๐Ÿ˜„jancy
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9:23
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Fairy blue bird walked over the lush green grass and looking around for the Sherrif mans
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๐Ÿฑโ€๐Ÿ‘คMaja๐Ÿฑโ€๐Ÿ‘ค
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The outcast roes from the night and one of them Wonder went to a tree an big, big tree and claymd she claymd to the very top. Yet she was blaynd it was the bigst tree in the forist uders told hre that she will foll ... so to day is the day Wonder fell yet she did not die .
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โคRIAโค
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9:25
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The outcast climbed the tree to hide from the sheriff's men.
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