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Antony Booth
9:32
Interestingly, the process of evacuation was an extremely complex operation.
Matty
9:37
Frequently, perilous bombs were being dropped on England's surface.
Dexter
9:37
Surprisingly, eighty seven thousand people were seriously injured and thirty two thousand people sadly died.
Edward
9:37
Even though Hitler wanted to lower peoples spirits, many people didn't lose hope.
Oliver F
9:38
As a rule, people in large cities has to put black clothes over there windows to stop Germans seeing there houses.
Antony Booth
9:38
Hi Oliver, re-write this using the past tense.
Faith
9:38
Interestingly, the Blitz started on the 7th of September in 1940 in London.
Anabel
9:38
Interestingly, it was a difficult time during the blitz especially for family's with nowhere to get to safety.
Orry
9:39
interestingly, people got jobs to help in the war, ( firefighters and ARP wardens. )
Antony Booth
9:39
Hi Orry, don't forget to use capital letters.
JaydenR
9:39
Luckily, most families had Anderson shelters in their backgarden.
oliver
9:39
Did you know, that during the blitz people mostly children got evacuated to the country side. ( Devon )
Antony Booth
9:39
Check your punctuation. Are you asking a rhetorical question?
Matty
9:39
Generally, an ARP Warden would tell everyone in their sight to turn every light source off in their vicinity.
JaydenM
9:40
Interestingly, bombs were also dropped in Liverpool and Bristol to weaken the country.
Edward
9:40
Most of the food was on short supply, so the government rationed it and the public had coupons.
Jack
9:40
Fascinatingly, the blitz was a system that saved many lives.
Antony Booth
9:40
Check your fact. Did the Blitz save lives?
Anabel
9:41
Surprisingly, many people were injured and sometimes killed.
Antony Booth
9:41
Choose another opener which would make better sense.
Matty
9:41
Surprisingly, police officers fought crime on the war.
Anabel
9:41
Devistatingly, many people lost there lives due to the Luftwaffe.
Poppy
9:42
Without question, the Blitz alone cost 32,000 lives and left roughly 87,000 critically injured.
Antony Booth
9:42
I like this. Can you add a further sentence to finish it off?
kenzie
9:42
Even though the cites had children in, the germans felt no remorse with bombing the cites.
Antony Booth
9:42
Check for proper noun capitals.
Edward
9:54
They avoided having lights on at night, as the bombers could see them and know where to bomb.
Orry
9:54
Even though bombs were dropped to make people give up, they didn't.
Oliver F
9:54
As a rule, people who lived in cities had to put black clothes over there windows to stop the Germans from see where they are are.
JaydenM
9:54
As a rule, people had to where gas masks to keep safe from the smoke which the bombs made.
Matty
9:55
Typically, the opposing plane bombers would target the docks at the countryside to prevent resources being traded and aquired.
Edward
9:55
As a rule, people had to carry a gas mask everywhere they went.
Faith
9:55
Surprisingly, people used to put tape up there windows and sleep in Morrison shelters to protect there self.
Anabel
9:55
Sadly,Hitlers plan was to kill as many people he could to weaken the country.
kenzie
9:55
Most parents would let their children be evacuated but the parents that did not would be putting their children in grave danger.
oliver
9:56
Luckily, if you had a light on that could be seen the ARP warden would say, "Get that light out!"
Jack
9:56
Fascinatingly, the blitz was a system that killed many people.
Dexter
9:56
Interestingly, Sheffield was a main target as it was well known for steel works as named The Steel City.
Orry
9:56
Fascinatingly, ARP wardens would shout, "Put that light out!" if they saw a light on.
Anabel
9:56
Unsurprisingly, many people lost there lives due to the Luftwaffe.
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