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Megan
1:23
The trees are towering over the clear blue lake.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:23
Tell me more about the lake!
Lucy
1:23
the trees are reflecting in the Crystal clear water
Guest
1:23
The trees look like christmas trees.
Phoebe
1:23
The fog sitting on the calm still water.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:24
What word could you add before fog?
Jacob w
1:24
The  misty fog drifted over the glisning water
Dylan
1:24
The misty pond becomin greyer and greyer by each second
Austin
1:24
The trees dim out the light.
Ellie
1:24
The thick fog covered the calm calm water
George
1:24
The trees loomed over the water.
Flo
1:24
In the backgrouond,i see varst trees that toch the sky.
Harry
1:24
Where is the smoke coming from
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:25
Harry - You tell me?
Hermione
1:25
The blanket of fog over the calm still water.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:25
What word could go between fog and over to improve this sentence?
Matthew
1:25
The calm steamy mist blew across the water.
Mr Tolfrey
1:25
The posts, standing strong like soldiers, pierced the still, calm lake.
Aidan
1:25
The ozing fog coming from air
Lucy
1:25
The mist is like smoke burning the trees but it is pink
Luca
1:25
The reflections of the dark,crowded trees
Callum
1:25
The posts are sticking up out of the glisaning water, with misty cloud above it.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:26
I like glistening! Now describe the trees for me.
TysonH
1:26
The dark oak wood tree was covered in white blanket of mist
Dylan
1:26
Tree’s dying because of lack of petrallising air in the sky
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:26
Use some personification Dylan. If they are dying, what might they be doing or feeling?
Mr Greenwood
1:26
While the mist circled mysteriously around the reflective water, the abundant trees stood guard like watchmen.
Megan
1:26
The lake is cristel clear lake a glass cup of warter.
Lucy
1:28
The sky is dark and grey like its going to rain
TysonH
1:28
The dark oak wood was covered in a blanket of white mist.
Phoebe
1:28
The wooden stamp in the frezing water
Ellie
1:28
The wooden poles sticking out of the cristal clear water almost covered in thick fog.
George
1:28
The mist blured out the forest.
Dylan
1:28
What will happen next???
Lucy
1:28
I wish i could swim in the lake but it might be quite cold
Muhammad
1:28
the Green thick trees,waving in the wind desprate to get in
the green thick leaves waving in the wind desparate to get in the water
Mr Greenwood
1:28
Lucy - what sound might the rain make when it hits the water?
Flo
1:28
The water is carm though the wind is strong. Why is the mist is over the lack.
Poppy
1:28
Like a blaket covering the dark gloomy trees
Ellie
1:28
You could see the trees in the refected water.
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