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George
1:35
The demon acted like she was in a fasion show
Ellie
1:35
The thin tall lady, with get black hair was standing in the middle of a forest with sticks burnig all over the place.
Imogen
1:35
The birds eating the ladies dress
Zak
1:35
As the foest berned the girl stood still like a tree
Callum
1:35
As the little sparkes shin in the mist, who also has menising birds with her Vampiersom looks!
Hermione
1:35
The birds wings flap in horror.
Luca
1:36
The evill Woman like a vampire in a movie!
The evill woman stood like a vampier in a battle feld.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:37
Jacob w
1:37
The evil lady like shes a sstatue
George
1:38
The crows flew aimlesly into the mist
Jacob w
1:39
The abandand house like its strat out of a horrer movie
Lucy
1:39
The sun is trying to shine through the clouds but the clouds are fiesty.
Megan
1:39
The trees are as balck as the deep night sky.
Muhammad
1:39
The black, wooden stick shaking as if it was the end of the world
Mr Tolfrey
1:39
The forest queen stood among the wreckage and destruction. She stood proud and bathed in the carnage that she had created. The crows let out desperate cries as their home burns around them.
Aidan :)
1:39
The lady standing like chrokee from land of roar
Phoebe
1:39
The sun coved in black fog
Harry
1:39
Is she good or bad
Jacob w
1:40
Its like the son took a day of
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:40
Harry, Phoebe and Harry - Don't forget your full stops.
Ellie
1:40
The sticks were buring making a planket of ash in the air.
Flo
1:40
As i row the bout in to the forrest,I see an evil wich. She had black hair and crows that hork her.
India :)
1:40
It looks like it the penniwise clowns houss .
Phoebe
1:40
Brocken house blach as night
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:40
Good attempt at a simile. What other similes could work?
Dylan
1:40
Why is the bush black
Jacob w
1:41
The house has given up
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:41
What has happened to the house to make if give up? Write a new sentence about this for me.
Mr Greenwood
1:42 
Dylan - you tell us, why is the bush black? What has happened to it?
India :)
1:42
It looks very dark and controlling and abandoned and it looks like it can come to life .
Jacob f
1:42
The house stood in the plane site.
Poppy :)
1:42
The dark old house stading there like a A
Abandoned
Jacob w
1:42
Its been abanden and left to rot.
Harry
1:42
Who lives there?
AvatarDavid Mitchell
1:42
Tell me more Harry!
Hermione
1:42
The haunted house stood in the dark menersing
Myles
1:42
A big evil dark soul in the air.
Megan
1:43
Dylan you forgot you question mark.
Ellie
1:43
Jacob w- Why has the house given up?
Hermione
1:43
The tree flowing over the house.
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