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St John Fisher in Norwich
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Mr. Mitchell
8:28
Good afternoon Year 5! I hope you are ready to showcase some amazing writing to the 10 teachers here in Norwich? Don't forget to check what you have written before sending it and remember to use simple punctuation correctly!

Are you ready to show off your writing?
Lauren and Adam
8:29
yes
Mr. Mitchell
8:30
Great! Don't forget to use punctuation!
Curtis Spencer
8:30
Good afternoon Mr. Mitchell
Bethany💙and Olivia😃
8:30
Good afternoon Mr Mitchell yes we are very excited!
Freya And Charlotte ✨
8:30
Good afternoon Mr. Mitchell.
Leon and Max 😜😎
8:30
Good afternoon Mr Mitchell
❤Molly Sophie ❤
8:30
Good Afternoon Mr.Mitchell
Zak and James
8:30
Good afternoon Mr. Mitchell
Alicia🌹 and Emily💖
8:30
Good afternoon Mr Mitchell
Rosie & Darcy 😍
8:30
Good afternoon Mr Mitchell
Stevie and Lexie 💖
8:30
Good Afternoon Mr. Mitchell
Tianna and Grace🌹
8:30
Good afternoon  Mr Mitchell
Mr. Mitchell
8:31
Can I ask you all to think about punctuating every sentence you write? Some of you are forgetting.
Bobby and Owain
8:31
Good afternoon, i am sure we will.
Lauren and Adam
8:31
good afternoon Mr . Mitchell
Mr. Mitchell
8:32
I will share an image with you in a minute, I'd like you to work with your partner to create a sentence describing something you can see. Remember to check it before sending it.
Alicia🌹 and Emily💖
8:32
Yes we will use punctuation.
Oliver
8:32
good afternoon Mr Mitchell
Mr. Mitchell
8:32
8:34
The pale mist drifted by the frozen trees whispering as it slowly floated above the still lake.
Bobby 😐🙄 Owain
8:35
In the distance there is a blanket of white mist hovering above the mystical forest.
Mr. Mitchell
8:35
I love the word hovering and blanket - Can you think of another word for white?
Lauren and Adam
8:35
In the distance I could see the steamy forest trees and the fluffy clouds .
💖Stevie and Lexie 💖
8:35
Standing tall behind the mystical water are trees surrounded by icy fog.
Mr. Mitchell
8:36
Lovely sentence! Can you think of another word for 'tall'?
Alicia🌹 and Emily💖
8:35
This breathtaking area is blanketed with soft,white mist. The forest holds beautiful creatures big and small.
Tianna and Grace🌹
8:36
Though the misty fog sits a mysterious forrest, filled with magical creatures.
Mr. Mitchell
8:36
If I give you some feedback, can you write the sentence out again including the ideas we have been discussing?
Bethany💙and Olivia😃
8:36
Standing proudly behind the misty haze, immense trees blew against the crisp wind.
Mr. Mitchell
8:37
I love the word 'proudly'! It adds personification and works really well!
❤Molly and Sophie ❤
8:37
In the icy fog, stands a crowd of dark green trees swaying in the powerful wind .
Mr Brown
8:37
Hi everyone, I would love to see some sentences with fronted adverbials in them. Can anyone write one for me?
Mrs Lee
8:38
We are very impressed so far with the descriptive writing. Keep it up!
Rosie & Darcy 😍
8:38
On a  foggy night on a mystical island the fluffy clouds are drifting across the calm sea.
💖Stevie and Lexie 💖
8:38
yes ,colossal.
Mr. Mitchell
8:38
Now add that to the sentence for me.
Freya And Charlotte ✨
8:38
Over in the distance of this misty setting, is a dark, mysterious forest full of damp, tall trees.
Mr. Mitchell
8:39
What does it smell like?
💖Stevie and Lexie 💖
8:39
Standing proudly behind the mystical water are colossal trees surrounded by icy fog.
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