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Year 4 Live blogging session
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Miss McDonald
6:43
Hello Year 4.
Welcome to our live blogging session!
Year 3 Owls
7:18
Hi Peacocks, we are waiting for your sentences...
Miss McDonald
7:19
Good morning Year 3!
Year 4 can you write a statement about the mountain picture on the board.
Caitlin
7:21
Happily, the wind rushed around the misty mountain top.
Dannii
7:22
The mountain looks snowy.
Miss McDonald
7:23
Can you add a fronted adverbial to this Dannii?
Leandro
7:22
The huge, tricky mountain hard to climb.
Year 3 Owls
7:23
Leandro - are you missing a word?
Mia
7:23
it is snowy
Lacey
7:23
The white clouds wave around.
Ellisia
7:24
The evergreen trees in front of the snowy, rocky mountain
valentyn
7:24
The higher the mountain the more snow it will get.
Year 3 Owls
7:24
Mia - yes it is Snowy - we think your sentence should have a capital letter and a full stop.
aiden
7:24
there is a windy strom
Miss McDonald
7:25
Can you fix your punctuation?
Caitlin
7:24
Bushy,green trees underneath the mountain are intimidated by the mountains huge scale.
Year 3 Owls
7:25
Year 3 Owls have uplevleled your sentence Dannii
7:28
Danii, what do you think? The colossal mountain is full of beautiful, peaceful snow.
Leandro
7:28
The huge, tricky mountain is hard to climb.
iza
7:28
Slowly, the water rushes down the river.
Year 3 Owls
7:28
Here are some of ours: Paul - The mountain is snowy, cold and ancient.
Miss McDonald
7:29
I love your use of commas in a list Paul!
Lacey
7:28
The rocky mountains I want  to climb this.
Joshua
7:29
The icing sugar like mountain with treacherous rocks underneath.
mia
7:29
There are green, bushy leaves in the distance.
Miss McDonald
7:30
Year 4 write an exclamation sentence about this mountain picture.
Callum and ashley
7:30
The high mountains china.
leon callum
7:31
The gigantic mountain.
Dannii
7:31
Year 3 Owls- Your sentence is good!
iza
7:31
Miss McDonald can we use similies?
Miss McDonald
7:31
Yes please!
Caitlin
7:31
Misty clouds envelope the beautiful,magestic mountain with unicorn colours.
Year 3 Owls
7:31
Mia - we love your use of a prepositional phrase!
Ria
7:32
White cold crystal steep mountains.
Dannii
7:32
What a rocky, cold looking mountain!
Year 3 Owls
7:32
We are loving this in our classroom Miss McDonald! The children can't wait to see whose sentences will pop up next!
Miss McDonald
7:32
Us too Mrs Hoey! The children are enjoying the instant feedback!
Joshua
7:32
How did he climb this!
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