JotCast | Year 5 English description | 3/20/2019

Year 5 English description

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Ava and Max

11:35

full stop sir

Aiden and Izabel B

11:35

Striking the rapid ocean, the lightning forced the survivors of the boat to evacuate it.

Catherine and George

11:35

In the distance, like a candy cane, stood a tall beacon of light.

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James & Emily

11:35

The lighthouse, which was in the distance, was covered in the dark, misty wind.

harry and isabel

11:35

We missed a comma

Oscar & Miranda

11:40

As the glimpse of hope spun away from the young toddler, who was stranded from his family, didn't know what to do but say his last words...

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Phoebe and Sophie

11:40

In the vast ocean, I could vaguely make out a figure floating in the sea. I wonderd who the courageous and adventurous daredevil could possibly be...

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Lucy and Abigail W

11:40

In the distance, where lightning struck, there was an empty, wooden boat were not a soul would been found...

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James.P & Lily

11:40

Amazingly, the incredible man, managed to save his precious life by climbing onto the unstable raft.

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Edie and Zak

11:40

As the mysterious boat sailed without an owner, the locals of the nearby village started to wonder how this terrible deed occured...

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Mr Fairhurst

11:42

The story has moved on... Can you use sentence openers from your sheet and expanded noun phrases?

Evan and Charlotte

11:42

Suddenly, the crashing of the waves stopped as the lighthouse keeper, Ephraim, noticed a single boat in the monstrous sea.Who was in the boat ?Will Ephraim save them ?

James & Emily

11:42

In the distance were lightning struck a small, empty, wooden boat was tipped over with some sort of mystery to discover.

Anna+Alex

11:42

As the abandoned boat drifted through the currents and crashing waves, the storm grew deeper.

Isla and Lucas

11:44

As the waves calmed, Ephraim, the lone lighthouse keeper, courageously dived into the deep, crystal ocean only to find a sinking, lifeless body.

Evan and Charlotte

11:45

Far away from home, Olive and Cliff found there way to a mysterious island in the middle of the isolated sea. Is Sukie there? Will they find her?

Mr Fairhurst

11:46

You have described the sea as isolated rather than the island. Could you think of another way of describing the sea?

James.P & Lily

11:46

Taking in sea water, the young man, who had nothing left of his old raft , was drifting closer to the desert island.

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Phoebe and Sophie

11:46

Now, whoever it was, had found there way to the island.Wondering what was going on they cluelessly wanderd around the tropical beach.

Aiden and Izabel B

11:46

Calmly, the waves slowly circled around the beach of the egg-shaped island.

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Harry and Isabel

11:46

About to give up hope, the abandoned man gazed up and found himself awestruck by the beauty that lay before his eyes.

Abigail and Nathan

11:46

In the distance, stood proudly a toppling hill, which would make a life changing experience for the family who were never to be seen on the boat, that horrifying night, were finally found again...

Catherine and George

11:46

In the distance like paradise, the mysterious island stood underneath the towering sun and looked like it was deserted

Anna+Alex

11:48

In the distance, stood a lonely island with no surroundings but the midnight blue sea.

Edie and Zak

11:48

In the miraculous distance, stood a marvellous tropical island with monumentell , beautiful trees with sand as white as paper.

James & Emily

11:48

The majestic sea spread out towards the warm island.

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Sophia and Bella

11:48

The two men, who discovered them self on the island decided to take a look around,for now they found hope.

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Oscar & Miranda

11:48

As a life changing coincidence, the young toddler who was in tears, was swooped to the deserted , tropical island.

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Ava and Max

11:49

As Olive and Cliff entered the dark dusty cave, a breeze of tropical cold air brushed there faces then it happens they see her...

Isla and Lucas

11:49

Reaching the steaming, white sand, Ephraim hauled the lifeless body to the shore and held it in his arms. He whispered, "It couldn't have happened to her...."

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Lucy and Abigail W

11:49

On a petit island, there lived dangerous, savage animals, so called as... THE ALMIGHTY TIGER.

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Harry and Isabel

11:49

Staring at the undiscovered paradise, John wondered if the beauty was reality.

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Evan and Charlotte

11:49

Olive and Cliff found there way to an isolated island in the middle of the pacific ocean.

Mr Fairhurst

11:50

It looks like there is a lot of debris on the island....

Edie and Zak

11:51

Beautifully, the elegant fish swam in the clear blue sea.

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Catherine and George

11:52

Sorry we forgot to put a comma and a full stop in are latest text. Are apologies.

Phoebe and Sophie

11:53

Calmly strolling through the sand, the curious ginger haired girl called for help and it was herd from miles away.

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Ava and Max

11:53

Bluebirds,Blackbirds and magpies all wondering were the debris came from.

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Harry and Isabel

11:55

Clambering to the silky shore, John saw birds majestically swooping through the lush jungle.

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Oscar & Miranda

11:57

Petrified,the young toddler hastily stud up against the debris which was scattered on the sandy shores.

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