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Andrea
11:21
Like a black mamba, the huge snake is slipping his way out of the curvy road.
Rio
2:56
The drop off the cliff looks like you would fall all the way threw the world and into space.
Leon
2:56
The over hanging cliff is taking a sun bathing in the mid day of the dry sunnnnn
Lennon
2:55
The road looks like a slick snake running from humans on the bumpy rock because there trying to hunt the poor snake.
Callum
2:55
The narrow road is dangers but beautiful but the road winds like a boom slang snake.
Owen
2:55
The other word could be passing.
Rio
2:55
The road seems like its slithering away from the hills and into the beautiful sea so it can escape from one and only one will know about...
AvatarDavid Mitchell
Lennon - If a tree hasn't eaten, could you say it's starving?
2:54
Owen - what other word for 'going' could you use? Winding? Meandering? Can you think of others?
Owen
2:53
This is a beautiful road and ocean going down to the sea.
Lennon
2:51
The skinny tree is screaming it hasn't eaten so it will get skinnier its screaming in terror thinking it will be stuck in this abandoned library for eternity.
Rio
2:51
The library looks like it could just crumble into small pieces.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:51
2:50
Andrea - I love that! You've made it sound like a prison! Well done!
Rio
2:50
The tree in the middle looks as if it wants to escape and the other looks like it saying "Wait for me pleeeeeaaaaaaase!"
Andrea
2:50
Whilst his friends are enjoying the bright sun, the poor tree is trying to break out of the antique library.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:50
Callum - I like that it is yelling for joy! Now tell me about the books.
Owen
2:49
The tree is trying to get away from the dirty, smelly library to see is friends to have a good life together.
Leon
2:49
The wall paint on the wall is trying to slip and slide away from this old overgrown inteanse library!.
Callum
2:49
The tree attacks the roof and wants to get out and as the books wait to be pulled out and yell for joy (last line is inspired by Mr.Mitchell.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:49
Lennon - Now bring the tree to life. Tell me about how the tree is feeling. For example...

Screaming in silence, the young Beech tree stretched...
Lennon
2:47
The middle tree is screaming for help through and its trying to get out by breaking a hole in the roof and its friends are waiting for him to be free so they can enjoy life together.
Rio
2:46
Each and every one of those buildings sit there and wait patiently for there demise.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:44
Leon
2:44
All i can see is the overgrown crowding plants as if they where waiting for there time to go crippled and old!.
Rio
2:43
Lifeless and bored, the trees look like they are bored and they seem to be lifeless though the trees leafs are still green as if it is alive but it still could be alive no one know because no one is alive to see so...
Owen
2:43
There Dirty, rusty and old cars are smashed to piece like when a glass has dropped on the ground. The trees are getting old and starting to die.
Andrea
2:43
just like a ghost town , nothing in there is moving
Callum
2:43
As the crippled car and board plane sit and wait the plants swarm in for the kill.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:43
Andrea - Don't forget your punctuation.
2:41
Rio - I think your first two lines could be replaced by:
Lifeless and bored, the trees...
2:40
Callum - Well done, I like how bored you have made it with the boring book. Now tell me about the plants you can see.
Lennon
2:40
The bonnet of the car looks like a bee weaving in and around spiky bushes as if it may die.
Andrea
2:40
whilst the day is sluggish coming to an end the tree are becoming older and older
Rio
2:40
The trees look like they are bored and they seem to be lifeless though the trees leafs are still green as if it is alive but it still could be alive no one know because no one is alive to see so...
Callum
2:40
The plane sat there waiting like its board just like reading a really boring book.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:39
Leon - Now tell me about the plants that you can see. Well done!
Leon
2:38
The destroyed car crippled like a statue in the middle of the long gone streets.
AvatarDavid Mitchell
2:37
Callum - I like that!! If it was waiting, would it be bored? Can you add that in for me?
Callum
2:37
The plane sits there waiting for the ultimate end to come.
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