JotCast | Year Five Amazon Adventure

Year Five Amazon Adventure

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Anna and Bella

2:37

The shore, full of debris, was isolated and only wildly growing plants can be seen.

Charlotte and Catherine

2:37

From the corner of my eye I recognised dazzling Scarlett flowers and beutiful birds flying by

Miranda and Edie

2:37

I could hear the chirp of a Scarlet Macaw graciously Perched on a mighty Kapok tree.

Mr Fairhurst

2:39

Correct this sentence. You have used capital letters incorrectly. Ask me if you are unsure.

Zak&Emily

2:40

As they wondered through the Forrest, there was bright green trees with branches dangling of them like monkeys.

Mr Fairhurst

2:40

Nice description. You should have used 'were' instead 'was'.

Isla W and James P

2:40

Journeying deep into the forest, my eyes were drawn to the vibrant colours of the scarlet macaws and parakeets hooting loudly. But beyond them, I could see two bright yellow eyes staring at me...

2:41

AHH!!! I screamed in terror, it snapped at the boat taking a big chunk of the wooden canoe, but the driver hit the alligator in the snout with his wooden oar, so then the alligator swam away into the depths of the rainforest.

Mr Fairhurst

2:42

If you are using speech remember to use speech marks.

Abigail And George

2:41

Slowly adventuring through the forest, I wondered to myself what animals are here.

Phoebe and Evan

2:41

I could see the towering trees and the steady branches. The magestic birds flew across the mesmerising blue sky, as the capybaras lumberd slowly towards their babies. I couldn’t wait to explore the magic of the rainforest and uncover mysteries that no one has ever seen before.

Anna and Bella

2:41

Searching in the colourful forest, the hot traveler’s walked and walked until they found some food and water in the mystical forest.

Aiden and Izabel B

2:42

Wondering, I stumbled across a forrest of birds flying above the beautiful green trees.

Zak&Emily

2:42

Thanks for the advice

Abigail & Harry

2:43

Strolling through the understory of the evergreen rainforest, the curious explorer smelt the smoke of an Indian campfire. Who should be waiting there?

Lucas and Lily

2:43

I’ve ventured far into the forest and I’m shivering there’s lots of dangers in a forest and I’m hoping the jaguars and mosquitoes aren’t hungry.

Mr Fairhurst

2:43

Add your missing commas please.

Miranda and Edie

2:43

Wandering through the canopy of trees, I had witnessed a mother and baby Anteater lumber across the emerald like grass.

Isabel and Sophie

2:43

The girl, who was hoping she could eat something, found some berries dangling from a vine covered tree.

Mr Fairhurst

2:46

The rainforest is full of life, be sure to describe all the wonders that can be seen and heard.
From now on I would like us all to write in past tense.

Charlotte and Catherine

2:46

As the trees hung over me like a giant, I wondered into the amazon knowing I have so much to look forward to.

Isla W and James P

2:46

Dappled skin emerged from the bushes. What is it? In the distance, I heard a scream, not the kind of excitement but the kind of distress... The more I stared at this creature, the more I realised how mesmerising it was. But deep down, I knew I was tasty snack in the eyes of this beast...

Anna and Bella

2:48

Squawking loudly, the scarlet birds fluttered gloriously above in the light blue sky.

2:49

As We got of the boat I clenched my book, as soon as I heard the howl of the capoochens. Five minutes later, I felt something furry touch the top of my head.My heart started to pound in my Chest and I looked up in fear but to my surprise it was just a sloth. My belly grumbled with hunger then I saw of Scarlett red berries I went to pick them but the man put the oar to my chest to stop me he said”NO those berries are poisonous!” In hunger I continued through the humid rainforest.

Ava and Nathan

2:51

Kara, imitating an ocelot, tripped over the vibrant vine of an evergreen tree that was the home of Parakeets, iguanas, sloths and many more not too mention the mesmerising scarlet macaw and wonders of the hidden world but some of those animals are deep within the forests.

Isabel and Sophie

2:51

Prowling through the bushes, a dappled creature circled around us preparing to pounce. Then it happened...... we only heard the screeching of macaws nearby...

Lucy and Oscar

2:51

Wandering through the woods, I saw a pair of glowing, yellow eyes staring at me. What was it?

2:51

The squirrel moneys screamed as I jumped to grab some apples.

Miranda and Edie

2:52

Echoing in the distance, a bellowing roar from a Jaguar could be heard from the deep depths of the Amazon.

2:52

Animals seeking in the night, to catch there pray, where hunting.

Aiden and Izabel B

2:53

I heard a noise and looked round the corner and saw something deadly. A jaguar...

Lucas and Lily

2:53

When in walked through the jungle that was filled with mystery, I saw all of the beautiful creatures that ran back and forth through the jungle chasing their prey.

Mr Fairhurst

2:53

Suddenly, you spot a hunter from an Amazonian tribe. Are they hunting you or something else?

Isla W and James P

2:54

Slowly but surely, the beast became yet a spec in the distance and we continued our long journey. After all that excitement, I calmed myself. Taking a deep breath, I listened to the gushing rivers beside me, the songs of birds, the growls of Jaguars. I reminded myself, “I will make this my heaven, no matter what...”

Abigail And George

2:54

As I continued through the Amazon,I saw a ferocious Jaguar prowling through the giant trees.

Aiden and Izabel B

2:57

Oh no a tribe! I think they are hunting me...

Isabel and Sophie

3:00

All of a sudden, a rustling noise came from the bush nearby. My blood ran cold... An unusual looking man leaped out pointing an arrow right at my head...

Phoebe and Evan

3:00

I clenched my book as I heard the strange sound of a peculiar creature. My mind was filled with questions about it, but deep down I new that there was a sense of danger. As I wandered around, I spotted a feirce looking Indian. He had a sharp bow and arrow which looked like a weapon. He had peculiar paintings on his face and spoke a foreign language. I wondered what would happen to me, as he seemed quite alarmed by me. But unbeknownst to me, he wasn’t very friendly.

Miranda and Edie

3:00

A rustle from a near by tree had caught my Turned abruptly to see a man lurking in the shadows watching my every move.....

Abigail And George

3:00

Suddenly,In the distance I saw a mysterious man with a spear as sharp as a blade, with shock I sprinted because I thought i was their Dinner.

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