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13th May Show
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Emily,10
5:22
It felt like some sort of machine, with metal plates on either side and sharp shards of glass jutting out of it.
Sachin
5:22
The woman approached back to find Seren missing..
Harry - SWW.
5:22
At that moment a train came flashing by making a hoot as it went through the station. Then one end of the box tared open. The another and another till there was one end not tared...
Natasha f
5:22
She wondered forward to see if she could find it, she could swear she heard it as she edged forward suddenly her eyes fixed onto a small parcle. But what was inside?
Pie
5:22
Thanks adults for responding. Children you can also respond to each other.
Arthur
5:22
With the platform so dark and filled with steam, Seren followed the animal reek to a carriage.
Mrs James
5:22
Jamie, I like the way you add a short but impactful sentence in the middle of your writing.
Alice
5:22
Luckily, a train was coming into the station. Seren bolted onto the nearest carriage as it came to a stop. Taking her seat, she glanced back at the parcel.
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