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Rachel
10:13
"George Llandogo - His green forehead was matted with grime" I love the word matted. Check the end of your sentence too.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary
10:13
The door of the castle was creaking in the strong wind, squeaking on its hinges.
Sachin
10:13
His fingernails shred, enveloped in grime.
Sachi
10:13
Disgusting teeth
Toby B
10:14
crouching to hide his ugliness
Mrs Kilgour
10:14
Rylee - can you think of something more terrifying that is green? We often hear green like grass.
Arthur SWW
10:14
His potato-sack trousers fell baggy at the ankles.
James
10:14
His skin is covered in a thin layer of grey hair like a spikey washing up brush.
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:14
The lumbering bear-like beast had talons like a bird of prey's. His teeth were like thorns, venomous jojodi plant's thorns.
jodie
10:14
He is abrupt, miserly and territorial to other goblins
Mrs Batchelor
10:14
George - love the description
Larraine H
10:14
Martha  - good observation of detail - can you add more?
TURNBULL
10:14
GOBLINS; SLIMY, GRIMY GROTESQUE. MEAN,DARK EYES HELD A MURDEROUS GAZE
Mrs Kilgour
10:14
Emma Westfield - I love the detail in your description. Does he smell too? What might he smell like?
Miss Siddall SPCEDS
10:14
Skin as blue as the mould in cheese
Oliver/UCPS
10:14
His nails filled with crumbling gold.
Mrs Murrin
10:14
Axel, maybe he stood staring (there not necessary)
Olivia, Summerfields
10:14
The blood goblin lives in a small cave where he feasts on children's blood like a vampire.
Daisy LEH
10:14
Slimy feet  on the steep staircase.
Momchil
10:14
his sharp, nasty nails, scratched as bullets
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:14
He is green like grass. Rylee - a good start - be more specific - which parts are green?
Sachin
10:14
Forgot a full stop!Sorry!
Melody - SummerFields
10:14
The book goblin was as boring as a piece of plain paper and as small as a bit of dust...
Miss Siddall SPCEDS
10:14
Oliver - describe his nails
Larraine H
10:14
Sachi - can you say why they were disgusting?  A good idea.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:14
Ears like small mountains   on the side of its head - great image, Louie!
Mrs James
10:14
Rylee - try and use a simile that we have not have heard before. Listen to Pie explain what a cliche is.
Rachel Orr
10:14
"Toby B - crouching to hide his ugliness" I love this image, Toby. Do you think this is why they often have a humped, arched back?
Thomas G Friezland Primary
10:14
The slime green goblin with chipped rotten teeth slumped against the wall of the once mighty fortress.
Mrs James
10:14
Jodie, now explain why he is abrupt.  How does he show that he is abrupt?
Martha
10:14
His wrinkling head had curse words written all over it.
Mrs Kilgour
10:14
Oliver - wow! Why are they filled with crumbling gold? What type of goblin is he?
Ryan SPCEDS
10:15
His cragy fingers hooking around.
Ellie (Thorntree primary)yr6
10:15
His eyes pierce the back of your head stealing your soul with his rotten grimy hands
Nina S-H
10:15
His prune like face is green the same as the rest of his body his beady eyes stare straidht at me!
George Llandogo
10:15
He had teeth as sharp as the tip Concorde.
Alice
10:15
His leather skin, slimmer than a slugs hung from his clawed hands.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:15
Olivia - very gory!
Mrs Batchelor
10:15
Violet -  love the bit eating the school children. Can you do a description?
Oakleigh Summerfields
10:15
His teeth like mouldy dragon claws with a really bad rotten smell.
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