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Sophia LEH
10:15
His razor sharp teeth perching in his blood filled mouth , as he smiled blood dripped from his teeth.
India (Pensby Primary)
10:15
As the goblin sat on the dirty steps the dark black birds circled above his bald green head. His eyes stared at them like he didn’t care.
Sachin
10:15
His eyes were an abyss of wonder.
Eden, Summerfields
10:15
Its face was ice cold with need for the taste of flesh, his me]
jake
10:15
He bared his gleaming yellow teeth.
Miss Siddall SPCEDS
10:15
Alice - what colour was his leather skin
Harry B
10:15
dribbled on with green slobber
Louie Summerfields
10:15
Bare feet like like old used sandpaper.
William SPCEDS
10:15
His bald head with large pointy ears green for the smell of him
Lily SWW
10:15
As the goblin laughed evily his fingernails twiched and reached into his backpack.
stanley
10:15
His deep starers show death
Amelia-Grange park primary
10:15
His eyes were clouded with dark thoughts, his teeth dripping in blood.
Freya pensby primary school
10:15
His bald, slimey head full with of thoughts. Weird thoughts.
kailen_summerfields
10:15
His teeth were mouldy, like a rotten banana
Mrs James
10:15
Nina, prunes are usually brown - how could you use this in your description?
Mrs Murrin
10:15
George, what shade of green is his forehead?
Shreesha
10:15
The Jungle goblin's feast is children bones which they find tasty and smooth to eat.
Larraine H
10:15
Oliver - love the idea of crumbling gold - can you say more?
Mrs Batchelor
10:15
Isla - Try not to repeat ugly
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:15
Melody - a book goblin - good idea. Where does he live? How does he behave?
Benjamin sww
10:15
With rusty trousers.
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:15
tooth like a tilted tower - Hayden - I like this - good simile.
Bethany Tatsfield Primary
10:15
Thanks Pie! His eyes stared into the darkness.
Amelia.E
10:15
The goblin eyes looked like flames of fire.
Hayden, Summerfields
10:16
The Sock goblin lives in your sock draw and has sweaty sock palms and wears a midnight black, baggy sock shirt!
Jake@John Moore Primary
10:16
Frail limbs like a sea anemone's tentacles, flapping in the wind lifelessly.
James
10:16
The goblin's green, wrinkly skin glistened in the light of the lightning storm.
Mrs Murrin
10:16
Alice, remember the comma after your extra information too.
Mrs James
10:16
Ju-Ah - soul stealing eyes is a powerful phrase.  Now use that phrase in a sentence by itself.
Thomas - Birchwood Primary Schoo
10:16
His green scaly skin like an alien from another planet.
Mila-JMPS-home
10:16
The aqua goblin had ears like a filthy pig.
Larraine H
10:16
George -eyes like mine-shafts etc is a good image - just edit as adding a few commas might help readers.
Mrs Kilgour
10:16
Ryan SPCEDS - what are they hooking around? Are they gnarled like twisted tree trunks? Can you describe what his face looks like now?
Rylee summerfildes
10:16
Teeth like mouldy and wet wood.
Lucas Boothman
10:16
The goblin ,which was pure evil, sat on the cracked step watching and waiting for its prey. It's crooked smile scared them away though so yet again he had to find them. He limped to a human town slowly and his twisted burnt leg dragging behind. His arm ,with grotesque yellow fingernails, reached out to a lamp post to steady himself.
Emily-Oaksey Class 3
10:16
Its hands like talons.Its eyes staring at me. Its teeth as sharp as a sharks glare. HELP!
Jamie- cams lane primary school
10:16
The crevices on his grotty green, thick skin were as deep as the craters on the moon.
Harry - SWW.
10:16
The goblins teeth were like razors with his bold green head shining like crystals.
Ryan SPCEDS
10:16
His pointy ears pointing in the moonlight
Micklefield 6M
10:16
His razor sharp claws shone like moonlight; his head filled with dreams of riches.
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