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AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:18
What did you like about it?
Mrs Kilgour
10:17
Mila JMPS - what makes him an aqua goblin Mila? What other features does he have? How are they particularly suited to him being an aqua goblin?
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:17
a really bad rotten smell - Oakleigh - could you have used a simile?
Imogen
10:18
Eyes like the ocean, able to turn you into a fish.
Shreesha
10:18
The goblin's nail has a red mark, it is child blood!
William SPCEDS
10:18
The goblin sitting in an awkward position ready to pounce at any moment
Miss Man@John Moore Primary
10:18
Breath like sewers brewing on a hot summer's day.
Larraine H
10:18
Ida - love the kennings
Mr C's Key Worker Kingdom
10:18
his skin is as green as a murky swamp
Rachel Orr
10:18
"Ida - his ugly nightmare conjuror, midnight mischief maker." I love the alliteration here, Ida. Are all goblins male?
Rylee summerfildes
10:18
He has a chest like freshly cut dark green grass.
Amelia-Grange park primary
10:18
His tough skin was a swampy green and his claws sharper than a shark's teeth.
Lydia
10:18
His stare was as sharp as daggers.
Freya pensby primary school
10:18
His pointy ears like elf ears.
Miss Siddall SPCEDS
10:18
William, what is he going to pounce at?
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:18
Emily - very detailed - well done!
Mrs James
10:18
Keerat, great use of a kenning for teeth.  Is it dear or deer?
James
10:19
The goblin's teeth were withered with black and its hands were battered with grime.
Mrs Kilgour
10:19
Eleanor - I love that your goblins have poisonous skin! I love your verb 'overrun' - I can imagine how many goblins that is! Why have they overrun the castle? What is it that they want?
Larraine H
10:19
Miss Man- John Moores - Yuk!!   great image
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:19
Emily - remember to stay using the same tense in your description.
Eden, Summerfields
10:19
Its face was frozen with need for the taste of flesh, his jet black eyes had a nasty sparkle to them and he licked his lips...
James
10:19
His cold hands were stumps of stone-like skin, almost impossible to look at.
Olivia st. Teresa’s
10:19
His clothes were filthy rags which were covered in blood and dirt
Mrs James
10:19
Mila, why did the aqua goblin have ears like a pig?
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:20
Eden - a chilling description! I like the ellipsis at the end for drama.
Utkarsha-Warren Road
10:20
Spikes encrusted in his green skin.
India (Pensby Primary)
10:20
The goblin’s rough fingernails clawed at the dusty floor. He picked up a caterpillar and ate it. He thought it a nice treat.
Arthur SWW
10:20
His scarred cheeks wrinkled beneath his bloodshot eyes.
Annie-Mae
10:20
His bald wrinkly head with yellowish teeth and his ears as pointy as mountains. Its like one big nightmare.
Leo
10:20
Eyes like glistening, green grass.
Beabop
10:20
The house goblin lives in the cabinet under the stairs.
Maggie SWW
10:20
His pointed ears twitched eagerly at every rumble of thunder from the gloomy, lightening-struck sky.
Emily, Manor field
10:20
His mottled,green skin glistened with slime as he stood there, his hooked nose sniffing around for blood...
ollie
10:20
His skin as wrinkly as a mouldy apple.
Freya pensby primary school
10:20
His lime, green body shining in the moonlight sky.
Rosa-Micklefield School
10:20
His enormous ears and eyes made him look a lot like a dormouse, but his ancient skin took away the cute effect.
JackJ
10:20
His ugly face scouling  at everybody his eyes peice though you like a hot knife stabbing butter.
Adyan DJS
10:20
The turquoise gobblin that has pointy ears is vilent
Ms McCarron
10:20
Love the 'chipped rotten teeth' Thomas!
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