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Lily
10:16
Long slender fingers like bean sprouts.
Sophie
10:16
His violet ears were as sharp as a saw.
Isla
10:16
He had scaly skin with a bold head, he looked dirty though he wasn't, at least I don't think so, it is hard to tell with such green, bumpy skin.
Jacob SPCEDS
10:16
The goblin's tonails were curled and scraped across the floor.
Miss Siddall SPCEDS
10:16
Isabella - I like your snake like motion
Arthur SWW
10:16
His abnormally large ears that could hear ants whisper secrets to one another, grew tufts of hair on the tips.
Rachel Orr
10:16
"Amelia.E - The goblin eyes looked like flames of fire." Amelia, could you turn this into a metphor?
Mr Simpson Summerfields
10:16
Louie - feet like sandpaper - I like that you are using sensory language to create feelings in the reader - this made me shudder!
Thomas G Friezland Primary
10:16
The vultures circled above the goblin's head. He was sick and tired and the vultures knew it.
Miss Siddall SPCEDS
10:16
Ryan, try not to use pointed twice
Mrs Murrin
10:16
Lily, what were those fingers doing?
Joseph 10
10:16
Gary screamed as the Goblin's nails tore his bone out of its socket.
Ollie SummerFields
10:16
The ocean goblin has massive gills, fins as small as a mouse and a tail as scaly as a snakes skin
Freya pensby primary school
10:16
His wrinkly finger nails as sharp as daggers.
Neve leh
10:16
I saw a goblin with dirty green skin has wrinkles etched into it.
Robert LEH
10:16
The goblin has gruesome red skin, presumably stained with blood, and knife-like yellow, rotten teeth. A crooked back concealing his cruel and unforgiving nature.
Seth at swW
10:16
As the emerald goblin sat on the stairs he stared at me for hours and hours. His huge ears could hear the screams of children.
Melody - SummerFields
10:17
His ears were caked with wax and his head was bald.
Oakleigh Summerfields
10:17
His warts growing really long hairs with even more warts on one wart.
Mrs James
10:17
Lydia, a great image of the runner bean.
Mr C's Key Worker Kingdom
10:17
His pointy elf ears point up at the ravens, drawing them in
Benjamin Warren Road Primary
10:17
His blood-red eyes stared into my horrified soul as crows squawked overhead chanting him on.
Pen Pen Malorees Junior School
10:17
Eyes staring deeply and a wrinkly face
Larraine H
10:17
Louie - Summerfields - loved the image of sand paper - just edit it.
Phoebe 11 RJS
10:17
His wrinkled arms are the colour of vomit. His little piggy eyes follow you around. Like a predator pinpointing when to pounce!
Mrs James
10:17
James, great image.  You've compared the hair to something we all recognise so it helps to paint the picture of the goblin's hair.
Avneet djs
10:17
The long pointy nails pointing I’m the fresh air
Ellie (Thorntree primary)yr6
10:17
Its nose was out of place but he could still smell your fears no matter how far you ran.
Violet LEH Y6
10:17
The Thorp Arch goblin has large eyes to see the children and huge hands to grab the children he has a ginormous mouth to eat the children.
Jack SPCEDS
10:17
His rough bald head with his pointy eair and crooked nose only smelling debris around him while he scratches te ancient stair case with hisrazorsarp claws.
keerat
10:17
His bold, emerald head was filled with evil thoughts. His meat-slicers bit into the crimson dear.
Theo
10:17
The green slime dripped off him like water dripping of a hand
Freya pensby primary school
10:17
His cold, mean red nose was like a clown.
Emily summerfields
10:17
The goblin had thick, grimy  skin layered  in warts, their eyes were a dark  brown. Their yellow rotten teeth snarling at anyone
Mrs Murrin
10:17
Arthur- remember the comma before your drop in.
Ida
10:17
This ugly nightmare conjuror, midnight mischief maker.
Eleanor
10:17
The castle was overrun by goblins, and large groups with pointed ears and poisonous green skin patrolled the corridors.
Aleksandra Sacred Heart Batterse
10:17
The goblin's grimy head was full of nasty tricks to catch children
Jacob/djs
10:17
A terrifying storm sipping his ugly brown hair of
Lily SWW
10:17
Love it Arthur.
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