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19th May Live Writing Session
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LuisWRPS
10:23
Sizzling sparks danced up into the misty air.
Olivia st Teresa’s
10:23
The orange flames flicker swiftly in the breeze
George (11) Stockland Primary
10:23
Flames Licking the carpet but no light is caught.
Isla
10:23
The warm feeling warming me up like a cake in the oven.
Issie
10:23
My paradise is made from the sun spraying rays of light through the sky
Amelia
10:23
My paradise is made from marshmallows melting on a camp fire and playing games in the dark with my friends.
samuel rogiet primary
10:23
my paridice is made from hot firery ashes flying from the the fire place
Nina S-H
10:23
My paradise is the crackling sound of the fire as it burns through the wood.
Amberlie
10:23
paradise Is sunlight shining shining on your feet.
Abigail (9) northmead
10:23
My paradise is the flickering, sparks of a fire .
Edith
10:23
My paradise is made from my warm snug bed. It is my trap door to another world.
Stan
10:23
My paradise is made of cloudless skies for miles around
Mrs James
10:23
Rebecca - friendship of my youth - I think I know what you mean.  Can you add another sentence so that it is more obvious what you mean>
Mr Walker
10:24
Isla: which cake is in the oven?
Martha
10:24
My paradise is made from the feeling of bark, digging in dust, cold sand on a hot day, squeezing my glow in the dark slime hard hard hard.
Beabop
10:24
Dreams of Harry Potter, and fairies and big cats
Mrs Shirtliff
10:24
Olivia - great inclusion of an adverb.
Freya llangorse school
10:24
My paradise is from the salty smell of the sea and the shiny inside of a shell.
Freya pensby primary school
10:24
My paridice is made of orange flames flickering from the ebony fireplace!
Arthur SWW
10:24
Rays of sun slicing through pale clouds.
Jack Davey
10:24
My paradise is made from the crackling, sparkling tickle of the campfire
S+W coastlands
10:24
my paridise is made from fun family and friends
Emily-Oaksey Class3
10:24
My paradise is made from the salty,spray of the waves.
Nicholas S
10:24
My grandma's special kisses.
Arthur & Carys
10:24
The sun-blasted sands of Barafundle Bay, trickling between my toes.
Conall
10:24
My paradise is made from hugs from my family
Charlotte H-Oaksey
10:24
my paradise is made from the spitting fire.
Emily, Manor field
10:24
My paradise is a pine scented forest with dappled sunlight illuminating the leafy woodland floor.
Issie
10:24
A sunset over the horizon
Chloe -SWW
10:24
Paradise is made from the warm breathe of the sun, and the flicker of candles.
robyn
10:24
my  paradise is me in the lush blue sea
AvatarDavid Mitchell
10:25
Sounds great Robyn - Don't forget your punctuation.
Mrs James
10:24
Nicholas - original idea.  Well done.
Mr Walker
10:24
Arthur and Carys- great naming of the bay here.
ned
10:25
my paradise is falling leaves and bark scattered around the floor
Mrs VB
10:25
Holly and Ella - a feather from a Phoenix is a lovely idea. Can you give us some more information - what colours?
Rosie
10:25
My paradise is made from the stories of the world.
Betuel.M
10:25
My paradise- a place where happiness never leaves us.
Devon
10:25
My paradise is made from shimmering, azure lakes.
Jack E
10:25
my paradise is made by the warmth of the sun and the smell of the salty sea
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